1: paragraph starting w/ "In some cases", 1st sentence, s/often/sometimes/
2: add ref to RFC 8174
2.1: s/defines a label for/defines the label for/
3.1:
a) 2nd paragraph, s/defines a label for/defines the label for/
b) 4th paragraph, add ref to RFC 6020
3.2, 1st paragraph:
a) 1st sentence, s/parent schema/data model supported by the server/?
b) 2nd sentence, s#yangmnt:schema-mounts#/yangmnt:schema-mounts#?
c) 2nd sentence, are mounts as stable as yang library? It seems that
if a new LNE were added, that would add a new mount point w/o
changing yang library...
d) perhaps discuss the implications of it being as stable? E.g.,
clients only need to check /yangmnt:schema-mounts when yang
library's checksum changes?
3.2, 2nd paragraph, can you add the section in rtgwg-lne-model that
has the exception, or some text about the nature of the exception
defined in that document?
3.2, last paragraph: is "in operational state"
3.3: an example would be helpful
5: end of 2nd paragraph, an example would be nice
6: 2nd paragraph, is the ref to RFC7950 correct?
9: in the ietf-yang-schema-mount module:
a) in the top-level description stmt, s/specify/specifies/?
b) in the "mount-point" container's description statement, would it be
helpful to add that multiple instances of the mount-point may exist
when the extension statement is used in a 'list' or 'grouping' stmt?
- this to help with the last paragraph in the description stmts for
both the inline and shared-schema nodes?
c) why is "shared-schema" a presence container?
d) for parent-reference, would it be helpful to note that the reference
MAY be to nodes that themselves were brought in via a parent ref, for
the nested schema mount case?
A. shouldn't there be an example parent schema module showing the
"mount-point" extension statement defining the "root" label?
global:
a) should "data node" be a term?
b) nowhere is RFC Editor asked to map XXXX to the assigned RFC number
c) nowhere is RFC Editor asked to map 2018-03-20 to the published date
Kent // contributor
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