Hi Kent,

Thanks for this. I think 4d is suggesting putting the rfc number in the comment block too, but having it where it is may be sufficient - you can add it now or see if there's a request for this later.

I'll ask Ignas (our AD) if he wants it submitted now or once the ID gate reopens.

Lou


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On July 10, 2019 10:34:54 PM Kent Watsen <k...@watsen.net> wrote:

Hi Lou (shepherd),

The requested updates have been pushed to GitHub, as can be seen by the commit diff: https://github.com/netmod-wg/artwork-folding/commit/24a1b25abd4d33c2ac07f09b1daa8725b5061f4c <https://github.com/netmod-wg/artwork-folding/commit/24a1b25abd4d33c2ac07f09b1daa8725b5061f4c>.

-07 will be posted to Datatracker when the submission window reopens (or sooner, if you request an exception).

PS: Erik and I are listed as copyright holders, in addition to IETF Trust, as seemed to be expected by (4c) in the link you provided. Please let me know if any adjustments are needed.

Thanks,
Kent (as an author)



On Jul 10, 2019, at 5:40 PM, Lou Berger <lber...@labn.net> wrote:

Hi Kent, Authors,

Sorry for the delay in processing this.  WRT your comments, see below:

On 6/27/2019 5:35 PM, Kent Watsen wrote:

This update primarily regards the non-normative script:

    - renamed to "rfcfold"
    - now only uses sed one-liners
    - auto-detects if platforms `[g]sed` and `pcregrep` are present and
       suitable, outputting an error message if not.
    - cleans up the temporary directory if exits for any reason
    - improved error message around the script not implementing the
      force-fold logic.

    Special thanks to Eric Auerswald for supplying the pull requests
    for much of the above!


Outside the updates to the script:

    - renamed 9.3:
          OLD: Example Showing Smart Folding
          NEW: Example Showing "Smart" Folding

    - renamed Appendix A:
          OLD: POSIX Shell Script: rfcfold
          NEW: POSIX Shell Script


My only comments are:

    1) the script itself doesn't name itself "rfcfold" anywhere.
            - albeit, the "name" attribute in the XML is set to "rfcfold".
I think adding a name would be good -- but this is a non-blocking comment.


    2) if the script is expected to be distributed, we may want/need to
        add a copyright statement and/or a pointer to its GitHub repo.


I believe the trust requires a specific license in all code segments in RFCs, see https://trustee.ietf.org/license-info/IETF-TLP-5.htm <https://trustee.ietf.org/license-info/IETF-TLP-5.htm> section 4. I think this needs to be added before the document can be submitted for publication.

Thanks,

Lou

(as Shepherd)



Thanks,
Kent


On Jun 27, 2019, at 5:20 PM, internet-dra...@ietf.org <mailto:internet-dra...@ietf.org> wrote:


A New Internet-Draft is available from the on-line Internet-Drafts directories.
This draft is a work item of the Network Modeling WG of the IETF.

       Title           : Handling Long Lines in Inclusions in Internet-Drafts 
and RFCs
       Authors         : Kent Watsen
                         Adrian Farrel
                         Qin Wu
        Filename        : draft-ietf-netmod-artwork-folding-06.txt
        Pages           : 26
        Date            : 2019-06-27

Abstract:
  This document defines two strategies for handling long lines in
  width-bounded text content.  One strategy is based on the historic
  use of a single backslash ('\') character to indicate where line-
  folding has occurred, with the continuation occurring with the first
  non-space (' ') character on the next line.  The second strategy
  extends the first strategy by adding a second backslash character to
  identify where the continuation begins and thereby able to handle
  cases not supported by the first strategy.  Both strategies use a
  self-describing header enabling automated reconstitution of the
  original content.


The IETF datatracker status page for this draft is:
https://datatracker.ietf.org/doc/draft-ietf-netmod-artwork-folding/ <https://datatracker.ietf.org/doc/draft-ietf-netmod-artwork-folding/>

There are also htmlized versions available at:
https://tools.ietf.org/html/draft-ietf-netmod-artwork-folding-06 <https://tools.ietf.org/html/draft-ietf-netmod-artwork-folding-06> https://datatracker.ietf.org/doc/html/draft-ietf-netmod-artwork-folding-06 <https://datatracker.ietf.org/doc/html/draft-ietf-netmod-artwork-folding-06>

A diff from the previous version is available at:
https://www.ietf.org/rfcdiff?url2=draft-ietf-netmod-artwork-folding-06 <https://www.ietf.org/rfcdiff?url2=draft-ietf-netmod-artwork-folding-06>


Please note that it may take a couple of minutes from the time of submission
until the htmlized version and diff are available at tools.ietf.org.

Internet-Drafts are also available by anonymous FTP at:
ftp://ftp.ietf.org/internet-drafts/ <ftp://ftp.ietf.org/internet-drafts/>

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