From: Tarek Saad <tsaad....@gmail.com>
Sent: 14 August 2020 17:30

Thanks Acee. Yes, will do in the next rev we'll push soon.

<tp>
Tarek,

In the same vein, having introductory text to each of the YANG tree diagrams 
would have helped me to understand what was intended.  As it stands, I reverse 
engineer the YANG to find the requirements and lo and behold the YANG meets 
those requirements.  A few sentences before each tree diagram saying ' this 
augments ... so that ... ' would have helped me.

You will find that most routing YANG I-Ds these days follow that pattern

Tom Petch

Tom Petch


Regards,
Tarek

On 8/14/20, 12:29 PM, "mpls on behalf of Acee Lindem (acee)" 
<mpls-boun...@ietf.org on behalf of acee=40cisco....@dmarc.ietf.org> wrote:

    Hi Tarek,
    Can you also add the description of the native MPLS RIB to the text?
    Thanks,
    Acee

    On 8/14/20, 12:27 PM, "mpls on behalf of Acee Lindem (acee)" 
<mpls-boun...@ietf.org on behalf of acee=40cisco....@dmarc.ietf.org> wrote:

        Hi Tarek,
        This works for me.
        Thanks,
        Acee

        On 8/14/20, 12:25 PM, "Tarek Saad" <ts...@juniper.net> wrote:

            Hi Acee and Tom,

            The authors of ID: draft-ietf-mpls-base-yang met and we discussed 
the points below.
            We understand that RFC8349 defines an AF-agnostic model for RIBs. 
RFC8349 defined only two types of RIBs (IPv4 and IPv6 RIBs), but we envision 
other types of RIBs too (e.g. L2 RIB, MCAST RIB, etc.), in addition to MPLS RIB 
-- and we hope all such RIBs indeed leverage the generic RIB model introduced 
in RFC8349.

            We revisited Acee's suggestion and made a small modification (on 
top of it) that makes IP routes, MPLS routes (and possibly L2 or MCAST routes 
in future) - all have similar MPLS augmentation (in terms of local-label) while 
still adhering with RFC8349 to augment with leaf destination-prefix.

            augment "/rt:routing/rt:ribs/rt:rib/rt:routes/rt:route" {
              when "derived-from-or-self(../../rt:address-family, "
                 + "'mpls:mpls')" {
                description
                  "This augment is valid only for native MPLS routes.";
              }
              description
                "This leaf augments a native MPLS route.";
              leaf destination-prefix {
                type leafref {
                  path "../local-label";
                }
                description
                  "MPLS destination prefix.";
              }
            }

            We follow same approach for the active route RPC and continue to 
use a leaf "destination-address" as input (that points to a local-label leaf).
            If this is acceptable, we believe the errata 6251 can be rejected 
and we'll proceed with the change in the MPLS RIB model.

            Regards,
            Tarek (for authors)

            On 8/11/20, 9:08 AM, "Acee Lindem (acee)" <a...@cisco.com> wrote:

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                Hi Tom, Draft Authors,

                The draft could easily be fixed. You just need to:

                  1. Expand on the single sentence in section 2.1 on the need 
for non-IP MPLS routes. Given that the draft wasn't modeled correctly, this 
wasn't apparent to most of the reviewers.
                  2. Add an MPLS AF only augmentation (enforced via a when 
statement) to each route for the MPLS AF specific destination-prefix or 
destination-address.
                  3. Limit the current local-label augmentation to non-MPLS AFs.
                  4. Limit the active-route augmentation to AF MPLS and change 
the input to destination-address.

                Thanks,
                Acee

                On 8/11/20, 6:10 AM, "tom petch" <ie...@btconnect.com> wrote:

                    From: Acee Lindem (acee) <a...@cisco.com>
                    Sent: 11 August 2020 10:47

                    Hi Tom,
                    I fully understood your original comment. There are other 
problems with this model. See inline.

                    On 8/11/20, 4:59 AM, "tom petch" <ie...@btconnect.com> 
wrote:

                        Tarek

                        Picking up on an earlier point,

                        ________________________________________
                        From: Tarek Saad <ts...@juniper.net>
                        Sent: 10 August 2020 21:23

                        Hi Acee,

                        The existing RPC is used to query (defined 
AFIs=IPv4/IPv6) RIB to return the matching active route identified by a 
"destination address".
                        The MPLS module is trying to reuse this RPC so to query 
the MPLS RIB to return the matching active route identified by a "local label".
                        The RPC defined in RFC 8349 readily accepts MPLS AFI in 
it (/rt:routing/rt:ribs/rt:rib/rt:active-route) - unless we augment and 
suppress it with a "when check".
                        IMO, it is reusable as-is but the text below is 
limiting the leaf name that identifies an entry in RIB to "destination-address" 
only - in MPLS RIB the entry leaf name that identifies an entry is 
"local-label".

                    It is not reusable as is since the augmentation RPC 
augmentation must have a when statement restricting it to AF MPLS. Also, 
local-label is a leaf which is applicable to all address families. It cannot be 
the AF MPLS destination-prefix. This augmentation is missing.

                    <tp>
                    I am probably getting out of my depth here,  On 1may20 I 
raised the issue of why the 'MUST' in the description in RFC8349 was not 
enforced in the YANG and 5may20 Martin explained that there is a rule in the 
YANG ABNF of input-stmt that makes the obvious impossible:-(  You are raising 
more profound issues about the RIB that I had not perceived when I reviewed 
mpls-base-yang for which I, and I hope everyone else, will be grateful.

                    If this mpls I-D is to proceed in the immediate future, it 
looks like the action may have to be deferred for future study.

                    More generally, I think that the interaction of forward by 
address and forward by label is challenging.  When first I looked at the MPLS 
I-D I was surprised at the way RFC8349 was augmented.  I had not seen MPLS as 
an alternative to IPv4 or IPv6 or ... in the way in which the RFC is used 
although the RFC does state that it can be; rather, to me, labels are a 
different animal, but I assumed that everyone knew what they were doing.

                    Tom Petch


                    Thanks,
                    Acee


                        <tp>
                        There should be a 'when' check to enforce the 'MUST' 
but the rules of YANG do not allow it in this structure.  I raised this on the 
NETMOD list at the time of WGLC and Martin pointed me to a rule in the ABNF 
which prohibits such a check.  He also said that the rule was not needed and 
would be a candidate to remove when YANG is revised.

                        Hence I have always thought of this MUST in the 
documentation as a constraint that must be enforced in the YANG

                        Tom Petch
                                >            action active-route {
                                >              description
                                >                "Return the active RIB route 
that is used for the
                                >                 destination address.
                                >
                                >                 Address-family-specific 
modules MUST augment input
                                >                 parameters with a leaf named 
'destination-address'.";

                        Regards,
                        Tarek

                        On 8/10/20, 3:27 PM, "Acee Lindem (acee)" 
<a...@cisco.com> wrote:

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                            All (Speaking as an author of RFC 8349),
                            I just looked at this in more detail and I don't 
think the ietf-mpls.yang model should be augmenting the 
/rt:routing/rt:ribs/rt:rib/rt:active-route RPC. The intent of the RPC is to 
return the address-family specific active-route corresponding to the 
destination-address. This model attempts to overload this RPC with a different 
action all together - returning a route that has the local-label as an optional 
attribute. I'd reject the Errata and believe the augmentation should be removed 
from ietf-mpl.yang. Whether it is replaced with a different one is up to the 
co-authors of ietf-mpls.yang.
                            Thanks,
                            Acee

                            On 8/10/20, 2:29 PM, "Rob Wilton (rwilton)" 
<rwil...@cisco.com> wrote:

                                [Resend to hopefully pass recipient limit 
filter]

                                Hi Tom,

                                I would be interested to hear from the original 
authors.

                                My impression is that this is a technically 
reasonable change, but I don't think that an erratum can create a new revision 
of a YANG module.

                                If this erratum was processed as "Hold for 
document update" then would that be sufficient to do the right thing in the 
MPLS YANG module?

                                Regards,
                                Rob


                                > -----Original Message-----
                                > From: tom petch <ie...@btconnect.com>
                                > Sent: 10 August 2020 17:32
                                > To: RFC Errata System 
<rfc-edi...@rfc-editor.org>; lho...@nic.cz; Acee
                                > Lindem (acee) <a...@cisco.com>; 
yingzhen...@huawei.com; war...@kumari.net;
                                > Rob Wilton (rwilton) <rwil...@cisco.com>; 
joe...@bogus.com;
                                > kent+i...@watsen.net; lber...@labn.net
                                > Cc: ts...@juniper.net; netmod@ietf.org
                                > Subject: Re: [netmod] [Technical Errata 
Reported] RFC8349 (6251)
                                >
                                > From: netmod <netmod-boun...@ietf.org> on 
behalf of RFC Errata System
                                > <rfc-edi...@rfc-editor.org>
                                > Sent: 07 August 2020 16:45
                                >
                                > <tp>
                                > This is the erratum of whose arrival I 
speculated on this list on June
                                > 16th.
                                >
                                > There is a degree of urgency about it.  The 
I-D in question is mpls-base-
                                > yang, currently in IETF Last Call, which is a 
Normative dependency of bfd-
                                > yang which is a Normative dependency for a 
small mountain of I-D which
                                > have been waiting a year or so (e.g.  
ospf-yang).
                                >
                                > I suspect that the technically perfect 
solution would involve a YANG
                                > union, choice or some such structure but as I 
said in my Last Call comment
                                > I can live with a label that contains such as 
'address' encompassing such
                                > as 'label' in the context of forwarding.  I 
take labels to mean what
                                > labels mean rather than what I might find in 
a work of reference.
                                >
                                > Tom Petch
                                >
                                > The following errata report has been 
submitted for RFC8349,
                                > "A YANG Data Model for Routing Management 
(NMDA Version)".
                                >
                                > --------------------------------------
                                > You may review the report below and at:
                                > 
https://urldefense.com/v3/__https://www.rfc-editor.org/errata/eid6251__;!!NEt6yMaO-gk!URK5WVsqD5g7WpzCU1VuzKJA0AUiawXBFLB_gENlsYMrpiMqDtyFoxw8DnSr2A$
                                >
                                > --------------------------------------
                                > Type: Technical
                                > Reported by: Tarek Saad <ts...@juniper.net>
                                >
                                > Section: 7
                                >
                                > Original Text
                                > -------------
                                > The RPC "active-route" is used to retrieve 
the active route in a RIB.
                                > RFC8349 defined two AFIs (v4/v6).
                                >
                                > draft-ietf-mpls-base-yang is defining a new 
RIB AFI for MPLS as per
                                > section 3 in RFC8349.
                                >
                                > The RPC has a "MUST" statement that all RIBs 
must augment input
                                > parameters with a leaf named 
'destination-address'.
                                >
                                > For MPLS RIB, it makes sense to augment with 
leaf named 'local-label'
                                > since MPLS routes are identified by MPLS 
label.
                                >
                                > We ask to make the following change:
                                >
                                > OLD:
                                >            action active-route {
                                >              description
                                >                "Return the active RIB route 
that is used for the
                                >                 destination address.
                                >
                                >                 Address-family-specific 
modules MUST augment input
                                >                 parameters with a leaf named 
'destination-address'.";
                                >
                                >
                                > Corrected Text
                                > --------------
                                > NEW:
                                >            action active-route {
                                >              description
                                >                "Return the active RIB route 
that is used for the
                                >                 destination address.
                                >
                                >                 Address-family-specific 
modules MUST augment input
                                >                 parameters with a suitable 
leaf that identifies the
                                > route.";
                                >
                                >
                                > Notes
                                > -----
                                >
                                >
                                > Instructions:
                                > -------------
                                > This erratum is currently posted as 
"Reported". If necessary, please
                                > use "Reply All" to discuss whether it should 
be verified or
                                > rejected. When a decision is reached, the 
verifying party
                                > can log in to change the status and edit the 
report, if necessary.
                                >
                                > --------------------------------------
                                > RFC8349 (draft-ietf-netmod-rfc8022bis-11)
                                > --------------------------------------
                                > Title               : A YANG Data Model for 
Routing Management (NMDA
                                > Version)
                                > Publication Date    : March 2018
                                > Author(s)           : L. Lhotka, A. Lindem, 
Y. Qu
                                > Category            : PROPOSED STANDARD
                                > Source              : Network Modeling
                                > Area                : Operations and 
Management
                                > Stream              : IETF
                                > Verifying Party     : IESG
                                >
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