Murray Kucherawy has entered the following ballot position for draft-ietf-netmod-nmda-diff-10: No Objection
When responding, please keep the subject line intact and reply to all email addresses included in the To and CC lines. (Feel free to cut this introductory paragraph, however.) Please refer to https://www.ietf.org/iesg/statement/discuss-criteria.html for more information about DISCUSS and COMMENT positions. The document, along with other ballot positions, can be found here: https://datatracker.ietf.org/doc/draft-ietf-netmod-nmda-diff/ ---------------------------------------------------------------------- COMMENT: ---------------------------------------------------------------------- In Section 7: "... number of requests that is served to a client ..." -- s/is/are/ Also, it strikes me that some of what's in Section 7 is repeated in the last paragraph of Section 9. I wonder if they could perhaps be merged, or 9 could reference 7, or something. _______________________________________________ netmod mailing list netmod@ietf.org https://www.ietf.org/mailman/listinfo/netmod
