This erratum looks correct to me and (IMHO) should be verified.

Eliot

On 18.01.23 15:29, RFC Errata System wrote:
The following errata report has been submitted for RFC8519,
"YANG Data Model for Network Access Control Lists (ACLs)".

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You may review the report below and at:
https://www.rfc-editor.org/errata/eid7312

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Type: Editorial
Reported by: Mohamed Boucadair <mohamed.boucad...@orange.com>

Section: A.1

Original Text
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    The "example-newco-acl" module is an example of a company's
    proprietary model that augments the "ietf-acl" module.  It shows how
    to use 'augment' with an XML Path Language (XPath) expression to add
    additional match criteria, actions, and default actions for when no
    ACE matches are found.  All these are company proprietary extensions
    or system feature extensions.  "example-newco-acl" is just an
    example, and it is expected that vendors will create their own
    proprietary models.

Corrected Text
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    The "example-newco-acl" module is an example of a company's
    proprietary model that augments the "ietf-access-control-list" module.  It 
shows how
    to use 'augment' with an XML Path Language (XPath) expression to add
    additional match criteria, actions, and default actions for when no
    ACE matches are found.  All these are company proprietary extensions
    or system feature extensions.  "example-newco-acl" is just an
    example, and it is expected that vendors will create their own
    proprietary models.

Notes
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There is no "ietf-acl" module in the document.

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RFC8519 (draft-ietf-netmod-acl-model-21)
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Title               : YANG Data Model for Network Access Control Lists (ACLs)
Publication Date    : March 2019
Author(s)           : M. Jethanandani, S. Agarwal, L. Huang, D. Blair
Category            : PROPOSED STANDARD
Source              : Network Modeling
Area                : Operations and Management
Stream              : IETF
Verifying Party     : IESG

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