Hi all, FWIW, I checked with IANA whether the changes [1] made to address the comment from Martin [2] are clear enough. Please see below.
Unless I hear any further comments on these changes, I will proceed with the submission of the new version early next week. Cheers, Med [1]: https://author-tools.ietf.org/api/iddiff?doc_1=draft-ietf-netmod-rfc8407bis&url_2=https://boucadair.github.io/rfc8407bis/draft-ietf-netmod-rfc8407bis.txt [2]: https://mailarchive.ietf.org/arch/msg/netmod/3_tg5oPbHhNQPbo3mMWy0m0cIzg/ -----Message d'origine----- De : Amanda Baber via RT <iana-iss...@iana.org> Envoyé : mercredi 13 décembre 2023 20:57 À : BOUCADAIR Mohamed INNOV/NET <mohamed.boucad...@orange.com> Objet : [IANA #1291942] RE: Early review: draft-boucadair-netmod-rfc8407bis (IETF 117) Hi Med, That works. Thanks! Amanda On Wed Dec 13 08:34:22 2023, mohamed.boucad...@orange.com wrote: > Hi Amanda, > > Thank you for the review. Unless you have an objection, I will forward > it to the netmod list. > > I confirm for 8126. Please let me know if this note in the abstract is > not that clear: > > Also, this document updates RFC 8126 by providing additional > guidelines for writing the IANA considerations for RFCs that specify > IANA-maintained modules. > > Thanks again. > > Cheers, > Med > > > -----Message d'origine----- > > De : Amanda Baber via RT <iana-iss...@iana.org> Envoyé : mardi 12 > > décembre 2023 19:57 À : BOUCADAIR Mohamed INNOV/NET > > <mohamed.boucad...@orange.com> Cc : bill...@huawei.com Objet : [IANA > > #1291942] RE: Early review: draft-boucadair-netmod- rfc8407bis (IETF > > 117) > > > > Hi Med, > > > > This is clear enough for us. Thanks! > > > > Sabrina had a question about the fact that it's updated RFC 8126: is > > this on account of Section 4.30.3, "Guidance for Writing the IANA > > Considerations for RFCs Defining IANA-Maintained Modules," or for > > another reason? > > > > Amanda > > > > On Fri Dec 08 07:56:38 2023, mohamed.boucad...@orange.com wrote: > > > Hi Amanda, > > > > > > We received yesterday a comment from Martin (echoing if I'm not > > > mistaken a discussion yangdoctors had with IANA). > > > > > > I updated the 8407bis as can be seen in the diff: https://author- > > > tools.ietf.org/api/iddiff?doc_1=draft-ietf-netmod- > > > > > rfc8407bis&url_2=https://eur03.safelinks.protection.outlook.com/?url > > =http%3A%2F%2Fh%2F&data=05%7C01%7Cmohamed.boucadair%40orange.com%7Cb > > 237e6d6859741f8878408dbfc159f94%7C90c7a20af34b40bfbc48b9253b6f5d20%7 > > C0%7C0%7C638380942381059264%7CUnknown%7CTWFpbGZsb3d8eyJWIjoiMC4wLjAw > > MDAiLCJQIjoiV2luMzIiLCJBTiI6Ik1haWwiLCJXVCI6Mn0%3D%7C1000%7C%7C%7C&s > > data=1WLN6iL5JsdGdL0If6%2BjcaReCtYgnaHTt2Dc%2BTXzah8%3D&reserved=0 > > > ttps%3A%2F%2Fboucadair.github.io%2Frfc8407bis%2Fdraft-ietf- > > &data=05%7C > > > > > 01%7Cmohamed.boucadair%40orange.com%7C5a8baffaa60348bf544708dbfb444c > > 9b > > > > > %7C90c7a20af34b40bfbc48b9253b6f5d20%7C0%7C0%7C638380043664326163%7CU > > nk > > > > > nown%7CTWFpbGZsb3d8eyJWIjoiMC4wLjAwMDAiLCJQIjoiV2luMzIiLCJBTiI6Ik1ha > > Ww > > > > > iLCJXVCI6Mn0%3D%7C1000%7C%7C%7C&sdata=ieawrY3uT%2Bohkw97Ha3d5wGBqJWv > > iB > > > YNRz3hZRoiWYU%3D&reserved=0 > > > netmod-rfc8407bis.txt > > > > > > The full text can be seen at: > > > > > https://eur03.safelinks.protection.outlook.com/?url=https%3A%2F%2Fbo > > uc%2F&data=05%7C01%7Cmohamed.boucadair%40orange.com%7Cb237e6d6859741 > > f8878408dbfc159f94%7C90c7a20af34b40bfbc48b9253b6f5d20%7C0%7C0%7C6383 > > 80942381059264%7CUnknown%7CTWFpbGZsb3d8eyJWIjoiMC4wLjAwMDAiLCJQIjoiV > > 2luMzIiLCJBTiI6Ik1haWwiLCJXVCI6Mn0%3D%7C1000%7C%7C%7C&sdata=76vf6mmq > > TKU5DRIRJ2hANms%2Bl0%2BabgpoBkG1eC8%2Byjs%3D&reserved=0 > > > adair.github.io%2Frfc8407bis%2Fdraft-ietf-netmod- > > &data=05%7C01%7Cmoham > > > > > ed.boucadair%40orange.com%7C5a8baffaa60348bf544708dbfb444c9b%7C90c7a > > 20 > > > > > af34b40bfbc48b9253b6f5d20%7C0%7C0%7C638380043664326163%7CUnknown%7CT > > WF > > > > > pbGZsb3d8eyJWIjoiMC4wLjAwMDAiLCJQIjoiV2luMzIiLCJBTiI6Ik1haWwiLCJXVCI > > 6M > > > > > n0%3D%7C1000%7C%7C%7C&sdata=fhBywi6ULrGZaRIZHpfGUsOkC%2FuwaaZPBeFncm > > HB > > > Xyk%3D&reserved=0 > > > rfc8407bis.html > > > > > > Can you please let me know if the changes are clear enough for > > > IANA? > > > Thanks. > > > > > > Cheers, > > > Med > > > > > > > -----Message d'origine----- > > > > De : Amanda Baber via RT <iana-iss...@iana.org> Envoyé : jeudi > > > > 17 août 2023 22:02 Cc : BOUCADAIR Mohamed INNOV/NET > > > > <mohamed.boucad...@orange.com>; bill...@huawei.com Objet : [IANA > > > > #1277027] Early review: draft-boucadair-netmod- rfc8407bis (IETF > > > > 117) > > > > > > > > Hi Med, > > > > > > > > Sorry about the delay. I managed to get COVID immediately after > > the > > > > meeting. This looks good, and I did look through Section 5.3. > > We'll > > > > make sure this is documented internally. > > > > > > > > thanks, > > > > Amanda > > > > > > > > On Fri Jul 21 05:56:51 2023, mohamed.boucad...@orange.com wrote: > > > > > Hi Amanda, > > > > > > > > > > Thank you for the review. > > > > > > > > > > I updated the text as per your feedback: > > > > > > > > > > > https://eur03.safelinks.protection.outlook.com/?url=https%3A%2F%2Fgi > > %2F&data=05%7C01%7Cmohamed.boucadair%40orange.com%7Cb237e6d6859741f8 > > 878408dbfc159f94%7C90c7a20af34b40bfbc48b9253b6f5d20%7C0%7C0%7C638380 > > 942381059264%7CUnknown%7CTWFpbGZsb3d8eyJWIjoiMC4wLjAwMDAiLCJQIjoiV2l > > uMzIiLCJBTiI6Ik1haWwiLCJXVCI6Mn0%3D%7C1000%7C%7C%7C&sdata=gKnxxyjrN3 > > gJK4TQz0mKV4Md9u8r7nLHK6qAbDLeppU%3D&reserved=0 > > > > > > th%2F&data=05%7C01%7Cmohamed.boucadair%40orange.com%7C5a8baffaa60348 > > > > > > bf544708dbfb444c9b%7C90c7a20af34b40bfbc48b9253b6f5d20%7C0%7C0%7C6383 > > > > > > 80043664326163%7CUnknown%7CTWFpbGZsb3d8eyJWIjoiMC4wLjAwMDAiLCJQIjoiV > > > > > > 2luMzIiLCJBTiI6Ik1haWwiLCJXVCI6Mn0%3D%7C1000%7C%7C%7C&sdata=XeSk%2BR > > > > O8cLhwGA7%2BONnHMHzrcFX3NRYcXnwHuiPttuo%3D&reserved=0 > > > > > > > > > > > ub.com%2Fboucadair%2Frfc8407bis%2Fcommit%2F4098b95dd3ecc2708279b4fbd > > > > 42 > > > > > > > > > > > 67ffd5463e088&data=05%7C01%7Cmohamed.boucadair%40orange.com%7Cd4c55a > > > > bb > > > > > > > > > > > 96c94e7127ec08db9f5cdcd0%7C90c7a20af34b40bfbc48b9253b6f5d20%7C0%7C0% > > > > 7C > > > > > > > > > > > 638278993417190515%7CUnknown%7CTWFpbGZsb3d8eyJWIjoiMC4wLjAwMDAiLCJQI > > > > jo > > > > > > > > > > > iV2luMzIiLCJBTiI6Ik1haWwiLCJXVCI6Mn0%3D%7C3000%7C%7C%7C&sdata=udG6zV > > > > sP > > > > > mK0mOSZTZRsaGA2GZwjs23JfvFMmoZxT6bI%3D&reserved=0 > > > > > > > > > > For your second comment, I confirm that the action is to > > > > > update the reference of the module: > > > > > > > > > > == > > > > > YANG Module Names > > > > > > > > > > Registration Procedure(s) > > > > > > > > > > RFC Required > > > > > > > > > > Reference > > > > > [RFC6020][RFC8407] > > > > > == > > > > > > > > > > I move the text to a separate par so that this is clearly > > > > > shown > > as > > > > > a third action. > > > > > > > > > > BTW, I wonder whether you also reviewed the following sections: > > > > > > > > > > 5.3. Guidance for Writing the IANA Considerations for RFCs > > > > > Defining IANA-Maintained Modules > > > > > 5.3.1. Template for IANA-Maintained Modules with Identities > > > > > 5.3.2. Template for IANA-Maintained Modules with > > > > > Enumerations > > > > > > > > > > Many thanks for all your effort. > > > > > > > > > > Cheers, > > > > > Med > > > > > > > > > > > -----Message d'origine----- > > > > > > De : Amanda Baber via RT <iana-iss...@iana.org> Envoyé : > > > > > > vendredi > > > > 21 > > > > > > juillet 2023 03:10 Cc : bill...@huawei.com; BOUCADAIR > > > > > > Mohamed INNOV/NET <mohamed.boucad...@orange.com> Objet : > > > > > > [IANA > > #1277027] > > > > > > Early review: draft-boucadair-netmod- rfc8407bis (IETF 117) > > > > > > > > > > > > Dear Authors, > > > > > > > > > > > > Before the IETF meeting, we check working group agendas for > > > > > > documents with IANA-related issues. We have notes about the > > > > current > > > > > > version of this document: > > > > > > > > > > > > > > https://eur03.safelinks.protection.outlook.com/?url=https%3A%2F% > > > > > > 2F > > > > > > datatracker.ietf.org%2Fdoc%2Fhtml%2Fdraft-boucadair-netmod- > > > > > > rfc8407bis- > > > > > > > > 01&data=05%7C01%7Cmohamed.boucadair%40orange.com%7Cd4c8430cd5394 > > > > > > 92 > > > > > > > > 676b708db89874344%7C90c7a20af34b40bfbc48b9253b6f5d20%7C0%7C0%7C6 > > > > > > 38 > > > > > > > > 254986266380338%7CUnknown%7CTWFpbGZsb3d8eyJWIjoiMC4wLjAwMDAiLCJQ > > > > > > Ij > > > > > > > > oiV2luMzIiLCJBTiI6Ik1haWwiLCJXVCI6Mn0%3D%7C3000%7C%7C%7C&sdata=a > > > > > > zT > > > > > > fA9K88a%2Bjgs9vL00v6WW1xRNW5mM5YpzdtbEwSjc%3D&reserved=0 > > > > > > > > > > > > The IANA Considerations section says, 'The following > > assignment > > > > was > > > > > > detailed in [RFC6087] and has been updated by IANA in the > > "YANG > > > > > > Module Names" registry to reference [RFC8407]. 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