Document: draft-ietf-netmod-sub-intf-vlan-model Title: Sub-interface VLAN YANG Data Models Reviewer: Dave Thaler Review result: Has Nits
I was the SECDIR reviewer for this document. In my view this document is ready, but I found a couple of nits that the RFC-Editor would likely catch as well. 1. Some acronyms need to be expanded on first use since they do not have "*" by them at https://www.rfc-editor.org/rpc/wiki/doku.php?id=abbrev_list. These include at least: LAG, PCP, DEI 2. The draft is internally inconsistent in terms of whether a comma follows "e.g." and "i.e." or not. I believe the RFC Editor follows Chicago Manual of Style here and always puts a comma after them. Dave _______________________________________________ netmod mailing list -- [email protected] To unsubscribe send an email to [email protected]
