Thanks Marc for the review. The nits identified below have been fixed in -16. 

The IETF datatracker status page for this Internet-Draft is:
https://datatracker.ietf.org/doc/draft-ietf-netmod-system-config/ 

There is also an HTMLized version available at:
https://datatracker.ietf.org/doc/html/draft-ietf-netmod-system-config-16 

A diff from the previous version is available at:
https://author-tools.ietf.org/iddiff?url2=draft-ietf-netmod-system-config-16

Best Regards,
Qiufang // co-author

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Subject: draft-ietf-netmod-system-config-15 ietf last call Artart review

Document: draft-ietf-netmod-system-config
Title: System-defined Configuration
Reviewer: Marc Blanchet
Review result: Ready with Nits

I was assigned as ARTART reviewer for this draft. I'm not a Yang or network 
management expert. I have not reviewed Yang and XML code. I found no issue with 
this draft, apart from small nits/suggestions identified by <MB> below.

   Configuration in <system> is undeletable to clients (e.g., a list

<MB>s/is undeletable to/can not be deleted by/ ?</MB>
   entry can never be removed from <system> through protocol
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   ([RFC8808]).  If system initializes a value for a particular leaf

<MB>s/If system initializes/If the system initializes/ or If <system> 
initializes ?</MB>

   which is overridden by the client with a different value in <running>



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