Gorry Fairhurst has entered the following ballot position for
draft-ietf-netmod-system-config-19: No Objection

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Thanks for providing this document. I do not see any transport-protocol related
concerns.

There is one use of "doesn't" in: "The system configuration datastore doesn't
persist across reboots". Personally, I would prefer this to be written as "does
not".

I also note that it is not clear in the revision whethert the examples in teh
appendices are normative or informatibve - and i think this could easily e
clarified in the first sentence/title.



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