> Before you can successfully wrap the required procedures, you are going to 
> have to first define four types.

I don't see anything wrong with this sentence.

> One of the biggest advantages that a language which can be translated to 
> JavaScript but also used for writing desktop applications is the ability to 
> share the same code between a client script and a server application.

That sentence is indeed convoluted. I will fix it, thanks.

> And please try to use the term Objective-C with the hyphen

Will fix this as well, thank you.

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