Thanks for your review, Meral. I've added the working group to this thread so that they're aware of your comments.
> From: Meral Shirazipour [mailto:meral.shirazip...@ericsson.com] > Sent: Monday, September 29, 2014 12:40 AM > To: draft-ietf-oauth-saml2-bearer....@tools.ietf.org; gen-...@ietf.org > Subject: Gen-ART Last Call review of draft-ietf-oauth-saml2-bearer-21 > > I am the assigned Gen-ART reviewer for this draft. For background on Gen-ART, > please see the FAQ at > http://wiki.tools.ietf.org/area/gen/trac/wiki/GenArtfaq. > > Please resolve these comments along with any other Last Call comments you may > receive. > > Document: draft-ietf-oauth-saml2-bearer-21 > Reviewer: Meral Shirazipour > Review Date: 2014-09-29 > IETF LC End Date: 2014-09-29 > IESG Telechat date: NA > > > Summary: > This draft is ready to be published as Standards Track RFC . > > > Nits/editorial comments: > Nits: > -Abstract, please consider smelling out Security Assertion Markup Language Agreed > -[Page 4] Section 2.1 ",use an access ..", it would be clearer to name the > entity (AS?) who would have to "use and access token...". Agreed. I propose we say that the client does this. > -[Page 5] Section 2.2 ", use the following parameter", same comment as above. Agreed. I propose we say that the client does this. > Best Regards, > Meral > --- > Meral Shirazipour > Ericsson > Research > www.ericsson.com Thanks again, -- Mike _______________________________________________ OAuth mailing list OAuth@ietf.org https://www.ietf.org/mailman/listinfo/oauth
