Thanks for the feedback.   We will review your comments and reply.

One data point is that this will not be the only POP spec.   The spec using 
token binding vs mtls has better privacy properties.  It is UK Open banking 
that has pressed us to come up with a standard to help with interoperability. 

This spec has been simplified in some ways to facilitate the majority of likely 
deployments.

I understand that in future certificates may have better than SHA256 hashes.

Regards
John B.


> On Mar 29, 2018, at 12:18 PM, Neil Madden <neil.mad...@forgerock.com> wrote:
> 
> Hi,
> 
> I have reviewed this draft and have a number of comments, below. ForgeRock 
> have not yet implemented this draft, but there is interest in implementing it 
> at some point. (Disclaimer: We have no firm commitments on this at the 
> moment, I do not speak for ForgeRock, etc).
> 
> 1. https://tools.ietf.org/html/draft-ietf-oauth-mtls-07#section-3.1 defines a 
> new confirmation method “x5t#S256”. However, there is already a confirmation 
> method “jwk” that can contain a JSON Web Key, which itself can contain a 
> “x5t#S526” claim with exactly the same syntax and semantics. The draft 
> proposes:
> 
>       { “cnf”: { “x5t#S256”: “…” } }
> 
> but you can already do:
> 
>       { “cnf”: { “jwk”: { … , “x5t#S256”: “…” } } }
> 
> If the intent is just to save some space and avoid the mandatory fields of 
> the existing JWK types, maybe this would be better addressed by defining a 
> new JWK type which only has a thumbprint? e.g., { “kty”: “x5t”, “x5t#S256”: 
> “…” }.
> 
> 2. I find the naming “mutual TLS” and “mTLS” a bit of a misnomer: it’s really 
> only the client authentication that we are interested here, and the fact that 
> the server also authenticates with a certificate is not hugely relevant to 
> this particular spec (although it is to the overall security of OAuth). Also, 
> TLS defines non-certificate based authentication mechanisms (e.g. TLS-SRP 
> extension for password authenticated key exchange, PSK for pre-shared key 
> authentication) and even non-X.509 certificate types 
> (https://www.iana.org/assignments/tls-extensiontype-values/tls-extensiontype-values.xhtml#tls-extensiontype-values-3).
>  I’d prefer that the draft explicitly referred to “X.509 Client Certificate 
> Authentication” rather than mutual TLS, and changed identifiers like 
> ‘tls_client_auth’ 
> (https://tools.ietf.org/html/draft-ietf-oauth-mtls-07#section-2.1.1) to 
> something more explicit like ‘tls_x509_pki_client_auth’.
> 
> This is especially confusing in section 3 on sender constrained access 
> tokens, as there are two different servers involved: the AS and the protected 
> resource server, but there is no “mutual” authentication between them, only 
> between each of them and the client.
> 
> 3. The draft links to the TLS 1.2 RFC, while the original OAuth 2.0 RFC only 
> specifies TLS 1.0. Is the intention that TLS 1.2+ is required? The wording in 
> Section 5.1 doesn’t seem clear if this could also be used with TLS 1.0 or 
> 1.1, or whether it is only referring to future TLS versions.
> 
> 4. It might be useful to have a discussion for implementors of whether TLS 
> session resumption (and PSK in TLS 1.3) and/or renegotiation impact the use 
> of client certificates, if at all?
> 
> 5. Section 3 defines sender-constrained access tokens in terms of the 
> confirmation key claims (e.g., RFC 7800 for JWT). However, the OAuth 2.0 Pop 
> Architecture draft defines sender constraint and key confirmation as 
> different things 
> (https://tools.ietf.org/html/draft-ietf-oauth-pop-architecture-08#section-6.2).
>  The draft should decide which of those it is implementing and if sender 
> constraint is intended, then reusing the confirmation key claims seems 
> misleading. (I think this mTLS draft is doing key confirmation so should drop 
> the language about sender constrained tokens).
> 
> 6. The OAuth 2.0 PoP Architecture draft says 
> (https://tools.ietf.org/html/draft-ietf-oauth-pop-architecture-08#section-5):
> 
>        Strong, fresh session keys:
> 
>               Session keys MUST be strong and fresh.  Each session deserves an
>               independent session key, i.e., one that is generated 
> specifically
>               for the intended use.  In context of OAuth this means that 
> keying
>               material is created in such a way that can only be used by the
>               combination of a client instance, protected resource, and
>               authorization scope.
> 
> 
> However, the mTLS draft section 3 
> (https://tools.ietf.org/html/draft-ietf-oauth-mtls-07#section-3) says:
> 
>       The client makes protected resource requests as described in
>       [RFC6750], however, those requests MUST be made over a mutually
>       authenticated TLS connection using the same certificate that was used
>       for mutual TLS at the token endpoint.
> 
> These two statements are contradictory: the OAuth 2.0 PoP architecture 
> effectively requires a fresh key-pair to be used for every access token 
> request, whereas this draft proposes reusing the same long-lived client 
> certificate for every single access token and every resource server.
> 
> In the self-signed case (and even in the CA case, with a bit of work - e.g., 
> https://www.vaultproject.io/docs/secrets/pki/index.html) it is perfectly 
> possible for the client to generate a fresh key-pair for each access token 
> and include the certificate on the token request (e.g., as per 
> https://tools.ietf.org/html/draft-ietf-oauth-pop-key-distribution-03#section-5.1
>  - in which case an appropriate “alg” value should probably be described). 
> This should probably at least be an option.
> 
> 7. The use of a single client certificate with every resource server (RS) 
> should be called out in a Privacy Considerations section, as it allows 
> correlation of activity.
> 
> 8. This is maybe a more general point, but RFC 6750 defines the 
> Authorization: Bearer scheme (https://tools.ietf.org/html/rfc6750#section-2) 
> for a client to communicate it’s access token to the RS in a standard way. As 
> sender-constrained access tokens are not strictly bearer tokens any more, 
> should this draft also register a new scheme for that? Should there be a 
> generic PoP scheme?
> 
> 9. The Security Considerations should really make some mention of the long 
> history of attacks against X.509 certificate chain validation, e.g. failure 
> to check the “CA” bit in the basic constraints, errors in parsing DNs, etc. 
> It should be strongly suggested to use an existing TLS library to perform 
> these checks rather than implementing your own checks. This relates to 
> Justin’s comments around DN parsing and normalisation.
> 
> 10. The PKI client authentication method 
> (https://tools.ietf.org/html/draft-ietf-oauth-mtls-07#section-2.1) makes no 
> mention at all of certificate revocation and how to handle checking for that 
> (CRLs, OCSP - with stapling?). Neither does the Security Considerations. If 
> this is a detail to be agreed between then AS and the CA (or just left up to 
> the AS TLS stack) then that should perhaps be made explicit. Again, there are 
> privacy considerations with some of these mechanisms, as OCSP requests are 
> typically sent in the clear (plain HTTP) and so allow an observer to see 
> which clients are connecting to which AS.
> 
> 11. The same comment applies to how the protected resource checks for 
> revocation of the certificate presented during sender constrained access 
> token usage. Should the RS make its own revocation checks based on the 
> information in the certificate presented, or should it trust the certificate 
> while the access token is still valid? If the latter case, is the AS 
> responsible for revoking any access tokens whose certificate have been 
> revoked (if so, should it be doing an OCSP call on every token introspection 
> request, and should the RS be passing on the certificate/serial number on 
> that request)? If the Client request uses OCSP Stapling 
> (https://en.wikipedia.org/wiki/OCSP_stapling) how can the RS verify the 
> signature on that if it does not have a separate trust relationship with the 
> CA already?
> 
> 12. The use of only SHA-256 fingerprints means that the security strength of 
> the sender-constrained access tokens is limited by the collision resistance 
> of SHA-256 - roughly “128-bit security" - without a new specification for a 
> new thumbprint algorithm. An implication of this is that is is fairly 
> pointless for the protected resource TLS stack to ever negotiate cipher 
> suites/keys with a higher level of security. In more crystal ball territory, 
> if a practical quantum computer becomes a possibility within the lifetime of 
> this spec, then the expected collision resistance of SHA-256 would drop 
> quadratically, allowing an attacker to find a colliding certificate in ~2^64 
> effort. If we are going to pick just one thumbprint hash algorithm, I would 
> prefer we pick SHA-512.
> 
> Cheers,
> 
> Neil
> 
> 
>> On 19 Mar 2018, at 22:34, Rifaat Shekh-Yusef <rifaat.i...@gmail.com> wrote:
>> 
>> All,
>> 
>> As discussed during the meeting today, we are starting a WGLC on the MTLS 
>> document:
>> https://tools.ietf.org/html/draft-ietf-oauth-mtls-07
>> 
>> Please, review the document and provide feedback on any issues you see with 
>> the document.
>> 
>> The WGLC will end in two weeks, on April 2, 2018.
>> 
>> Regards,
>> Rifaat and Hannes
>> 
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