thanks and done

On Thu, Sep 5, 2019 at 11:53 AM Benjamin Kaduk <ka...@mit.edu> wrote:

> On Wed, Sep 04, 2019 at 06:17:32PM -0600, Brian Campbell wrote:
> > On Wed, Sep 4, 2019 at 5:55 PM Benjamin Kaduk <ka...@mit.edu> wrote:
> >
> > > On Wed, Sep 04, 2019 at 05:19:27PM -0600, Brian Campbell wrote:
> > > > Thanks Ben, for the review and non-objectional ballot.
> > > >
> > > > On Wed, Sep 4, 2019 at 3:13 PM Benjamin Kaduk via Datatracker <
> > > > nore...@ietf.org> wrote:
> > > >
> > > > > Benjamin Kaduk has entered the following ballot position for
> > > > > draft-ietf-oauth-resource-indicators-05: No Objection
> > > > >
> > > > > Section 3
> > > > >
> > > > >    An access token that is audience restricted to a protected
> resource
> > > > >    that obtains that token legitimately cannot be used to access
> > > > >    resources on behalf of the resource owner at other protected
> > > > >    resources.  The "resource" parameter enables a client to
> indicate
> > > the
> > > > >
> > > > > nit: This sentence has a pretty strange construction.  I think the
> > > > > intent is to say that that a token, legitimately presented to a
> > > > > resource, cannot then be taken by that resource server and
> > > > > illegitimately present it somewhere else for access to other
> resources.
> > > > > But with the current wording we seem to be missing part of the part
> > > > > where some entity obtains the token with intent for illegitimate
> > > access.
> > > > >
> > > >
> > > > Yes, despite the pretty strange construction, you have the correct
> > > intent.
> > > > I'll work on improving that sentence (borrowing heavily from your
> words
> > > > there).
> > > >
> > > >
> > > >
> > > > >    Some servers may host user content or be multi-tenant.  In
> order to
> > > > >    avoid attacks that might confuse a client into sending an access
> > > > >    token to a resource that is user controlled or is owned by a
> > > > >    different tenant, it is important to use a specific resource URI
> > > > >    including a path component.  This will cause any access token
> issued
> > > > >    for accessing the user controlled resource to have an invalid
> > > > >    audience if replayed against the legitimate resource API.
> > > > >
> > > > > I'm not entirely sure what this is trying to say.  What is the
> > > > > "legitimate resource API"?  Why would a token be issued for
> accessing a
> > > > > user-controlled resource if that's something we're trying to avoid
> > > > > having confused clients access?
> > > > >
> > > >
> > > > Um... so on rereading that I might say that it's also "pretty
> strange".
> > > >
> > > > What it was trying to somehow say is similar to the previous nit
> about
> > > > audience-restricted not being usable at the resource for whom the
> weren't
> > > > intended. But saying so in the context of a multi-tenant environment.
> > > > Basically it's trying to say that, in a multi-tenant environment, the
> > > > resource URI and subsequent token audience need to have something
> that
> > > > identifies the tenant so as to prevent the token from being used by
> one
> > > > tenant to illegitimately access resources at a different tenant. I'll
> > > work
> > > > on trying to improve that text to better explain all that.
> > >
> > > Ah, yes, that's a very good point to make.  I'm happy to look at some
> draft
> > > text if you want.
> > >
> >
> > Thanks, here's what I've got now for this and the previous item in sec 3.
> > Suggestions welcome.
> >
> > 3.  Security Considerations
> >
> >    An audience-restricted access token, legitimately presented to a
> >    resource, cannot then be taken by that resource to present it
> >    elsewhere for illegitimate access to other resources.  The "resource"
>
> I think "by that resource and presented elsewhere" probbaly has a more
> parallel flow.
>
> >    parameter enables a client to indicate the protected resources where
> >    the requested access token will be used, which in turn enables the
> >    authorization server to apply the appropriate audience restrictions
> >    to the token.
> >
> >    Some servers may host user content or be multi-tenant.  In order to
> >    avoid attacks where one tenant uses an access token to illegitimately
> >    access resources owned by a different tenant, it is important to use
> >    a specific resource URI including any portion of the URI that
> >    identifies the tenant, such as a path component.  This will allow
> >    access tokens to be audience-restricted in a way that identifies the
> >    tenant and prevent their use, due to an invalid audience, at
> >    resources owned by a different tenant.
>
> But other than the above nit, this all looks really good; thank you!
>
> -Ben
>

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