Here's my cover-to-cover review of the OAuth Security BCP draft. The content of it is in GitHub, for the convenience of the editors.
GitHub Issues: * https://github.com/oauthstuff/draft-ietf-oauth-security-topics/issues/27#issuecomment-1140173551 * https://github.com/oauthstuff/draft-ietf-oauth-security-topics/issues/26#issuecomment-1140176847 * https://github.com/oauthstuff/draft-ietf-oauth-security-topics/issues/30 * https://github.com/oauthstuff/draft-ietf-oauth-security-topics/issues/31 * https://github.com/oauthstuff/draft-ietf-oauth-security-topics/issues/32 * https://github.com/oauthstuff/draft-ietf-oauth-security-topics/issues/33 * https://github.com/oauthstuff/draft-ietf-oauth-security-topics/issues/34 * https://github.com/oauthstuff/draft-ietf-oauth-security-topics/issues/35 * https://github.com/oauthstuff/draft-ietf-oauth-security-topics/issues/36 * https://github.com/oauthstuff/draft-ietf-oauth-security-topics/issues/37 * https://github.com/oauthstuff/draft-ietf-oauth-security-topics/issues/38 * https://github.com/oauthstuff/draft-ietf-oauth-security-topics/issues/39 * https://github.com/oauthstuff/draft-ietf-oauth-security-topics/issues/40 * https://github.com/oauthstuff/draft-ietf-oauth-security-topics/issues/41 * https://github.com/oauthstuff/draft-ietf-oauth-security-topics/issues/42 * https://github.com/oauthstuff/draft-ietf-oauth-security-topics/issues/43 * https://github.com/oauthstuff/draft-ietf-oauth-security-topics/issues/44 * https://github.com/oauthstuff/draft-ietf-oauth-security-topics/issues/45 GitHub PR (addressing only obvious wording and grammatical issues): * https://github.com/oauthstuff/draft-ietf-oauth-security-topics/pull/46 Thanks again for writing the draft! Best wishes, -- Mike
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