Michelle Olson wrote: > Ben Rockwood wrote: > >> Michelle Olson wrote: >> >> >>> Hi all, >>> >>> I've incorporated the last few changes from OGB and posted the draft >>> content here: http://stage.opensolaris.org/os. Please take a look at the >>> pages in the 'Overview' section of the left navigation bar and send >>> final comments by Friday. Any and all comments are welcome. >>> >>> >>> >> Here are my comments, take them as you please: >> >> * About page: Looks fine. Might want to change "free, open source, >> ..." You mean to say "no cost, open source", but could be construed as >> "free software". This is a minor nit to be sure. >> >> * Values: The list is limp at best. Innovation is one of our core >> values. How about integrity? The list, as presented, might as well be >> omitted, imho. >> >> >> benr. >> >> >> >> > Hiya Ben, > > I've added a section for values (Innovation, Integrity, and Quality). > Tomorrow, I'll work on the text, please send along any content or > pointers you have that I could use to get started. Thanks for your time > to review! > > -Michelle > > > _______________________________________________ > advocacy-discuss mailing list > advocacy-discuss at opensolaris.org > http://mail.opensolaris.org/mailman/listinfo/advocacy-discuss > Hi all,
Per Ben's feedback I've drafted a new section about our values (Quality and Invention). I mention integrity in the introductory paragraph, but I don't have an entire section for it because listing integrity as a value is redundant. Any and all comments welcomed: http://stage.opensolaris.org/os/about/values/ Thanks in advance, Michelle
