Just took a look at the info, Excellent work.
Some comments:
In Basic Character Classes, I think there needs to be more distinction
between hero classes and prestige classes.... though a "available at
first level" designation won't work for some games.
In Familars, references to "sorceror" may be confusing... perhaps
substituting "arcane users" or using wizard/sorceror interchangeably
through the text (like the PHB does with gender)
In Basic Races, the Height/Weight/Age information should be included
with the individual races instead of the end of the section.... this
will help formulate the basic Stat blocks for races.
Skills made me notice that the Prestige classes don't get any skill
points... They should... you may want to doublecheck.
In Equipment, good to see the futuristic weapons in here. Though you
may want to add the rules for them and Exotic Weapon Proficiency to
Feats.
In Creatures, I'm Very pleased to see the information from the MM on how
to build monsters.
Overall formatting.... The tendancy to use Underline, Bold and Italics
interchangeably as section Titles/breaks may prove annoying for those of
us who will be trying to automate the entry of the data into databases.
Thanks Ryan... It looks really good. I'm very pleased.
-John
"Ryan S. Dancey" wrote:
>
> I have made some changes (pretty significant in terms of formatting and new
> material, but nothing really significant in terms of deletions) to the SRD,
> and have posted the current draft versions of the Trademark licenses and the
> Guide - these are essentially unchanged (save for some typo fixes) from last
> week, and are almost certainly the final texts of these documents.
>
> Ryan
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