Review: Needs Fixing
Line 12: The OSIS XML standard was designed...

Line 20 ... `Bible Technologies website. <- remove the period and put it after 
the link

Line 40: ... For check out the `CCLI website. <- huh? doesn't make sense

Line 124: `Here 
<http://www.linuxjournal.com/video/getting-mp3-support-fedora-using-rpmfusion-repositories>`_
 is a good tutorial video on the rpmfusion repository
Please don't use "here" as your link, it's not descriptive. Rather say 
something like, "Follow the tutorial on <using the rpmfusion repository> to 
enable extra video formats on Fedora.

154     +Currently OpenLP does not support PowerPoint Viewer 2010. PowerPoint 
2010 should
155     +work correctly but there have been some issues when it does not work. 
If you 

"PowerPoint 2010 should work correctly, although some users have reported 
problems."

163     +Try installing the `Visual C++ Runtime Redistributable. 
<http://www.microsoft.com/downloads/en/details.aspx?FamilyID=9b2da534-3e03-4391-8a4d-074b9f2bc1bf&displaylang=en>`_

Installing the <Visual C++ Runtime Redistributable> has fixed this problem, 
according to some of our users.


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