Some of these changes sound better to me. Maybe personal preference? Line 28 change we to "you" and consider "First you will need to" Line 46 Now you need to restart Line 47 cap the When Line 52 You will see the Line 61 consider using ** for bold per Raoul Line 69-70 You will need to add Line 75 You instead of we Line 91 You instead of we
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