Author: sebawagner
Date: Wed Apr 25 18:12:02 2012
New Revision: 1330457
URL: http://svn.apache.org/viewvc?rev=1330457&view=rev
Log:
OPENMEETINGS-231 fix some more wording and typos
Modified:
incubator/openmeetings/trunk/singlewebapp/docs/index.html
incubator/openmeetings/trunk/singlewebapp/xdocs/index.xml
Modified: incubator/openmeetings/trunk/singlewebapp/docs/index.html
URL:
http://svn.apache.org/viewvc/incubator/openmeetings/trunk/singlewebapp/docs/index.html?rev=1330457&r1=1330456&r2=1330457&view=diff
==============================================================================
--- incubator/openmeetings/trunk/singlewebapp/docs/index.html (original)
+++ incubator/openmeetings/trunk/singlewebapp/docs/index.html Wed Apr 25
18:12:02 2012
@@ -893,7 +893,7 @@ limitations under the License.
<span>
<b>Calendar</b>
<br />
- You can create meeting with the
integrated calendar
+ You can create meetings with
the integrated calendar, conference rooms and invitations are automatically
send to everybody
</span>
</a>
@@ -902,10 +902,7 @@ limitations under the License.
<span>
<b>File Explorer</b>
<br />
- Each room has its own
File-Explorer - A drag and drop interface
- for handling files and folders.
- Each user has its own private
drive that is the same no matter what
- conference room you go.
+ Each room has its own
File-Explorer. Each user has his own private drive and additionally there is a
public drive to share files with other participants
</span>
</a>
@@ -914,7 +911,7 @@ limitations under the License.
<span>
<b>Integration API</b>
<br />
- There is a SOAP/REST API to
integrate into your website, as well
+ There is a SOAP/REST API to
integrate into your website or intranet, as well
as LDAP/ADS connectors and
VoIP/Asterisk integration modules
</span>
</a>
@@ -942,11 +939,11 @@ limitations under the License.
<a href="#">
<img
src="images/cut_recordings_playback.png" alt="Share and Record" />
<span>
- <b>Screensharing and
Recording</b>
+ <b>Screen sharing and
Recording</b>
<br />
- You can do screensharing as
well as recording whole sessions
- including audio/video and
download the recordings as AVI or FLV or
- watch directly in the
integrated recordings playback UI.
+ You can do screen sharing as
well as recording of whole sessions
+ including audio/vide.
Recordings can be downloaded as AVI/FLV or
+ watched online in the
integrated player.
</span>
</a>
Modified: incubator/openmeetings/trunk/singlewebapp/xdocs/index.xml
URL:
http://svn.apache.org/viewvc/incubator/openmeetings/trunk/singlewebapp/xdocs/index.xml?rev=1330457&r1=1330456&r2=1330457&view=diff
==============================================================================
--- incubator/openmeetings/trunk/singlewebapp/xdocs/index.xml (original)
+++ incubator/openmeetings/trunk/singlewebapp/xdocs/index.xml Wed Apr 25
18:12:02 2012
@@ -34,7 +34,7 @@
<span>
<b>Calendar</b>
<br />
- You can create meeting with the
integrated calendar
+ You can create meetings with
the integrated calendar, conference rooms and invitations are automatically
send to everybody
</span>
</a>
@@ -43,10 +43,7 @@
<span>
<b>File Explorer</b>
<br />
- Each room has its own
File-Explorer - A drag and drop interface
- for handling files and folders.
- Each user has its own private
drive that is the same no matter what
- conference room you go.
+ Each room has its own
File-Explorer. Each user has his own private drive and additionally there is a
public drive to share files with other participants
</span>
</a>
@@ -55,7 +52,7 @@
<span>
<b>Integration API</b>
<br />
- There is a SOAP/REST API to
integrate into your website, as well
+ There is a SOAP/REST API to
integrate into your website or intranet, as well
as LDAP/ADS connectors and
VoIP/Asterisk integration modules
</span>
</a>
@@ -83,11 +80,11 @@
<a href="#">
<img
src="images/cut_recordings_playback.png" alt="Share and Record" />
<span>
- <b>Screensharing and
Recording</b>
+ <b>Screen sharing and
Recording</b>
<br />
- You can do screensharing as
well as recording whole sessions
- including audio/video and
download the recordings as AVI or FLV or
- watch directly in the
integrated recordings playback UI.
+ You can do screen sharing as
well as recording of whole sessions
+ including audio/vide.
Recordings can be downloaded as AVI/FLV or
+ watched online in the
integrated player.
</span>
</a>
