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  Server: cvs.openpkg.org                  Name:   Ralf S. Engelschall
  Root:   /e/openpkg/cvs                   Email:  [EMAIL PROTECTED]
  Module: openpkg-web                      Date:   20-Jul-2004 09:27:22
  Branch: HEAD                             Handle: 2004072008272200

  Modified files:
    openpkg-web/press       PR-006-openpkg-2.1.txt

  Log:
    some more cosmetics

  Summary:
    Revision    Changes     Path
    1.2         +16 -17     openpkg-web/press/PR-006-openpkg-2.1.txt
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  patch -p0 <<'@@ .'
  Index: openpkg-web/press/PR-006-openpkg-2.1.txt
  ============================================================================
  $ cvs diff -u -r1.1 -r1.2 PR-006-openpkg-2.1.txt
  --- openpkg-web/press/PR-006-openpkg-2.1.txt  20 Jul 2004 07:03:15 -0000      1.1
  +++ openpkg-web/press/PR-006-openpkg-2.1.txt  20 Jul 2004 07:27:22 -0000      1.2
  @@ -8,15 +8,15 @@
     OpenPKG project is proud to announce version 2.1 of its OpenPKG
     software, another evolutionary step after a series of five
     predecessors within three years.
  -  
  +
     Much valued by IT decision makers and beloved by Unix system
     administrators, OpenPKG is the world leading instrument for deployment
  -  and maintenance of Open Source software when administration crosses
  -  Unix platform boundaries. The unique OpenPKG architecture leverages
  +  and maintenance of Open Source Unix software when administration
  +  crosses platform boundaries. The unique OpenPKG architecture leverages
     proven technologies like Red Hat Package Manager (RPM) and OSSP
     and GNU components to establish a unified software administration
  -  environment, independent of the underlying operating system.
  -  
  +  environment, independent of the underlying Unix operating system.
  +
     NEW IN VERSION 2.1
   
     OpenPKG platform support has increased again and OpenPKG 2.1 is now
  @@ -26,7 +26,7 @@
     9. Additionally, all CORE and the vast majority of BASE class packages
     are already available for the tentative platforms NetBSD 1.6.2, Debian
     GNU/Linux 3.1, Gentoo Linux 1.4.16, Mandrake Linux 10.0, Sun Solaris
  -  10 and HP HP-UX 11.11 and it is still available for the obsoleted
  +  10 and HP HP-UX 11.11 and they are still available for the obsoleted
     platforms Red Hat Linux 9, SuSE Linux 9.0, and Sun Solaris 2.6.
   
     Since the previous release four months ago, the OpenPKG package
  @@ -38,15 +38,15 @@
   
     The major technical efforts for this release were spent on the porting
     of all packages to five additional Unix platforms and the necessary
  -  adjustments required by GCC 3.4.
  +  adjustments to packages required by GCC 3.4.
   
     Another key target of OpenPKG 2.1 is the availability of the
     consolidated and packaged tool chain to the community. It consists of
     all packaging tools used by the OpenPKG team, including their official
     OpenPKG development shell ("openpkg dev"). This now enables everyone
  -  to easily establish a local OpenPKG development environment allowing
  -  the creation of private packages, the modification of existing
  -  packages and the maintenance of local changes.
  +  to establish a local OpenPKG development environment, allowing the
  +  creation of private packages, the modification of existing packages
  +  and the maintenance of local changes.
   
     VOICE OF THE SPONSOR
   
  @@ -54,12 +54,11 @@
     team is responsible for, has been increased by a factor of 250%
     during the last six months. Thanks to our continuous deployment of
     OpenPKG, we were able to cope with this administration challenge
  -  while retaining the high service quality with the existing number of
  -  engineers."
  -                         Hennie van den Berg,
  -                         Director IT Services Europe,
  -                         Cable & Wireless
  -
  +  while retaining the high service quality with the existing number
  +  of engineers."
  +                                      Hennie van den Berg,
  +                                      Director IT Services Europe,
  +                                      Cable & Wireless
     HIGHLIGHTS OF OPENPKG
   
     * Portable across major Unix flavors.
  @@ -79,7 +78,7 @@
     * Binaries of CORE+BASE class packages provided for supported platforms.
     * Binaries of CORE class packages provided for all platforms.
     * Easy installation, updating and deinstallation of packages.
  -  * Bundled with useful and secure package preconfigurations.
  +  * Bundled with useful and secure package pre-configurations.
     * Includes an abstracted and powerful run-command facility.
     * Virtual hosting through multiple instances on a single system.
     * Proxy packages for reusing packages across instances.
  @@ .
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