OpenPKG CVS Repository
http://cvs.openpkg.org/
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Server: cvs.openpkg.org Name: Michael Schloh
Root: /e/openpkg/cvs Email: [EMAIL PROTECTED]
Module: openpkg-web Date: 09-Aug-2004 14:37:22
Branch: HEAD Handle: 2004080913372100
Modified files:
openpkg-web doc.wml
Log:
diverse english grammar, style, and usage corrections
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Revision Changes Path
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$ cvs diff -u -r1.14 -r1.15 doc.wml
--- openpkg-web/doc.wml 15 Apr 2004 19:22:06 -0000 1.14
+++ openpkg-web/doc.wml 9 Aug 2004 12:37:21 -0000 1.15
@@ -5,8 +5,8 @@
<h1>Documentation</h1>
-There is a bunch of documentation for OpenPKG. Here are the links to
-their versions which can be best viewed on-line:
+As explained on this page, OpenPKG offers quite a lot of documentation.
+Following are links to the HTML versions of most documents:
<ul class="compact">
<li><a href="doc/slideset/openpkg/">OpenPKG Slideset</a> (HTML 4.0)
@@ -14,18 +14,17 @@
<li><a href="tutorial.html">OpenPKG User Tutorial</a> (HTML 4.0)
<li><a href="doc/articles/sysadmin/article.html">OpenPKG Article</a> (HTML 4.0)
<li><a href="doc/handbook/openpkg.html">OpenPKG Handbook</a> (HTML 4.0)
- <li><a href="doc/book/maximum-rpm.html/">RPM Book "Maximum-RPM"</a> (HTML 4.0)
- <li><a href="doc/howto/rpm-howto.html">RPM HOW-TO</a> (HTML 4.0)
+ <li><a href="doc/book/maximum-rpm.html/">RPM Book "Maximum RPM"</a> (HTML 4.0)
+ <li><a href="doc/howto/rpm-howto.html">RPM HOWTO</a> (HTML 4.0)
</ul>
<hr>
#<h2>The OpenPKG Brochure</h2>
#
-#This is the brochure for OpenPKG. It summarizes the key points of
-#OpenPKG on a two-page sheet for people who do not know anything about
-#OpenPKG. It is still under construction and available in the following
-#formats:
+#This is a brochure, summarizing the key points of OpenPKG on a two page
+#sheet for those not knowing anything at all about OpenPKG. It is under
+#construction and available in the following formats:
#
#<ul>
# <li><a href="doc/brochure/openpkg.ppt">PowerPoint</a> (PowerPoint 2000;
<b>source</b>)
@@ -33,8 +32,8 @@
<h2>The OpenPKG Slideset</h2>
-This is the overview slideset for OpenPKG. It summarizes OpenPKG in a
-one-hour presentation for users and developers. It is available in the
+This is the overview slideset, which summarizes OpenPKG in a one hour
+presentation for both users and developers. It is available in the
following formats:
<ul class="compact">
@@ -46,9 +45,9 @@
<h2>The OpenPKG Quick Reference</h2>
This is the quick reference for OpenPKG. It summarizes the commands and
-facts one has to know on a daily basis when working with OpenPKG. It is
-intended for OpenPKG users with some limited knowlege of OpenPKG. It is
-still under construction and available in the following formats:
+facts for working with OpenPKG on a daily basis and is intended for users
+with some limited knowlege of OpenPKG. The quick reference is under construction
+and available in the following formats:
<ul class="compact">
<li><a href="doc/quickref/openpkg.txt">Text</a> (ISO-Latin 1; <b>source</b>)
@@ -56,8 +55,8 @@
<h2>The OpenPKG Article</h2>
-This is a very concise and all-in-one summary article about OpenPKG.
-It describes all essentials of OpenPKG.
+This article is a very concise yet comprehensive summary about OpenPKG.
+It describes all OpenPKG's essentials:
<ul class="compact">
<li><a href="doc/articles/sysadmin/article.html">HTML</a> (HTML 4.0)
@@ -67,8 +66,8 @@
This is the official handbook for the OpenPKG project. It describes
all important issues of OpenPKG in detail and is intended for both for
-end-users and developers. It is still under construction and available
-in the following formats:
+end users and developers. It is under construction and available in the
+following formats:
<ul class="compact">
<li><a href="doc/handbook/openpkg.xml">XML</a> (DocBook XML 4.1.2; <b>source</b>)
@@ -82,18 +81,18 @@
<h2>The Book "Maximum RPM"</h2>
-<img src="doc/book/maximum-rpm.grey.gif" align=right> There is an
-official book RPM book entitled "<u>Maximum RPM -- Taking the Red Hat
-Package Manager to the Limit</u>", written by by Edward C. Bailey in
-1997. Is is 442 pages long and covers everything from general RPM usage
-to building your own RPMs to programming with rpmlib.
+<img src="doc/book/maximum-rpm.grey.gif" align=right> There is a
+book entitled "<u>Maximum RPM -- Taking the Red Hat Package Manager
+to the Limit</u>", written by by Edward C. Bailey in 1997. Is is 442
+pages long and covers everything from general RPM usage to building
+your own RPMs to programming with rpmlib.
<p>
-The book was originally available in hardback under ISBN 1888172789
-from the Red Hat Press. The original LaTeX and Postscript sources still
-can be found on <a href="http://www.rpm.org/";>http://www.rpm.org/</a>.
-Currently only a paperback version is available on the market under the
-ISBN 0672311054. The content in both book versions is exactly the same.
+The book was originally available in hardback (ISBN 1888172789) from the
+Red Hat Press, however only a paperback version (ISBN 0672311054) is
+currently available. The content in both book formats is exactly the
+same, and the original LaTeX and Postscript sources are still found on <a
+href="http://www.rpm.org/";>http://www.rpm.org/</a>.
<p>
For your convinience we've assembled the material, converted the LaTeX
@@ -107,11 +106,10 @@
<li><a href="doc/book/maximum-rpm.ps.gz">Postscript</a> (PS Level-2; gzip)
</ul>
-<h2>RPM HOWTO</h2>
+<h2>The RPM HOWTO</h2>
-There is also an RPM HOWTO from the <a href="http://www.linuxdoc.org/";>Linux
-Documentation Project</a> (LDP). This is a tutorial-style paper which
-introduces working with RPM.
+There is a tutorial style paper from the <a href="http://www.linuxdoc.org/";>Linux
+Documentation Project</a> (LDP) which introduces working with RPM:
<ul class="compact">
<li><a href="doc/howto/rpm-howto.sgml">SGML</a> (DocBook SGML 3.0; <b>source</b>)
@@ -122,14 +120,12 @@
<hr>
-<h2>Articles</h2>
+<h2>Some other Articles</h2>
-There are various articles about RPM flying around on the net.
-A few good ones we reference here:
+A few good RPM articles found on the Internet are:
<ul class="compact">
<li><a href="http://www.ibm.com/developerworks/library/l-rpm1/";>Packaging software
with RPM, Part 1</a>
<li><a href="http://www.ibm.com/developerworks/library/l-rpm2/";>Packaging software
with RPM, Part 2</a>
</ul>
-
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