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Server: cvs.openpkg.org Name: Michael Schloh
Root: /e/openpkg/cvs Email: [EMAIL PROTECTED]
Module: openpkg-web Date: 20-Oct-2004 11:31:19
Branch: HEAD Handle: 2004102010311800
Modified files:
openpkg-web/press PR-007-openpkg-2.2.txt
Log:
break undue sentence runons, remove unclear 'again' suggestion of repeating,
remove flawed hyphenation or composition, fully rewrite new paragraph
'portability' and 'upgrade path' to avoid an unclear message, and partially
rewrite paragraph 'principle author' to avoid a redundant opening sentence
Summary:
Revision Changes Path
1.4 +17 -17 openpkg-web/press/PR-007-openpkg-2.2.txt
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patch -p0 <<'@@ .'
Index: openpkg-web/press/PR-007-openpkg-2.2.txt
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$ cvs diff -u -r1.3 -r1.4 PR-007-openpkg-2.2.txt
--- openpkg-web/press/PR-007-openpkg-2.2.txt 20 Oct 2004 08:30:54 -0000 1.3
+++ openpkg-web/press/PR-007-openpkg-2.2.txt 20 Oct 2004 09:31:18 -0000 1.4
@@ -25,20 +25,20 @@
8 and 9. Additionally, all CORE and the vast majority of BASE class
packages are already available for the tentative platforms NetBSD
1.6.2, Debian GNU/Linux 3.1, Gentoo Linux 1.5.3, Mandrake Linux 10.0,
- Sun Solaris 10 and HP HP-UX 11.11 and they are still available for the
- obsoleted platforms SuSE Linux 9.0 and Sun Solaris 2.6.
+ Sun Solaris 10 and HP HP-UX 11.11. Packages are even still available
+ for the obsoleted platforms SuSE Linux 9.0 and Sun Solaris 2.6.
Since the previous release four months ago, the OpenPKG package
- repository has again grown by 10%. A subset of 528 packages were
- carefully selected for inclusion into the OpenPKG 2.2 release,
- including latest versions of popular Open Source Unix software like
- Apache, Bash, BIND, GCC, INN, Mozilla, MySQL, OpenSSH, Perl, Postfix,
+ repository has grown by 10%. A subset of 528 packages were carefully
+ selected for inclusion into the OpenPKG 2.2 release, including the
+ latest versions of popular Open Source Unix software like Apache,
+ Bash, BIND, GCC, INN, Mozilla, MySQL, OpenSSH, Perl, Postfix,
PostgreSQL, Samba, Squid, teTeX and Vim.
- The major technical efforts for this release were spent on reducing
- the requirements on the underlying Unix platforms and further
- improving the portability of our packages. Additionally, we ensured
- that a smooth upgrade path exists from OpenPKG 2.1.
+ Focusing on portability and isolation, OpenPKG 2.2 places greater
+ emphasis on reducing underlying Unix system requirements. Effort was
+ expended to offer a smooth upgrade path from the previous release,
+ which should reassure administrators of high availability systems.
HIGHLIGHTS OF OPENPKG
@@ -54,12 +54,12 @@
* Entirely based on Open Source software technology.
* Minimum operating system intrusion and dependency.
* Minimum overhead in software packaging.
- * All packages up-to-date with vendor versions as of 12-Oct-2004.
+ * All packages up to date with vendor versions as of 12-Oct-2004.
* Sources of 528 CORE+BASE+PLUS packages released.
* Binaries of CORE+BASE class packages provided for supported platforms.
* Binaries of CORE class packages provided for all platforms.
* Easy installation, updating and deinstallation of packages.
- * Bundled with useful and secure package pre-configurations.
+ * Bundled with useful and secure package preconfigurations.
* Includes an abstracted and powerful run-command facility.
* Virtual hosting through multiple instances on a single system.
* Proxy packages for reusing packages across instances.
@@ -74,11 +74,11 @@
production use, and is maintained and improved by its original
developers and volunteer contributors.
- OpenPKG is the brainchild of Ralf S. Engelschall, principal author of
- numerous other popular Open Source Software technologies like OSSP
- components, Apache SSL/TLS Engine (mod_ssl), Apache URL Rewriting
- Engine (mod_rewrite), GNU Portable Threads (Pth), GNU Portable Shell
- Tool (Shtool), Website META Language (WML) and many more.
+ Ralf S. Engelschall is the principal author of numerous other popular
+ Open Source Software technologies as well. His accomplishments include
+ releases of OSSP components, Apache SSL/TLS Engine (mod_ssl), Apache
+ URL Rewriting Engine (mod_rewrite), GNU Portable Threads (Pth), GNU
+ Portable Shell Tool (Shtool), Website META Language (WML) and more.
MORE INFORMATION
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