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  Server: cvs.openpkg.org                  Name:   Thomas Lotterer
  Root:   /e/openpkg/cvs                   Email:  [EMAIL PROTECTED]
  Module: openpkg-web                      Date:   31-Jul-2003 21:42:39
  Branch: HEAD                             Handle: 2003073120423800

  Modified files:
    openpkg-web/press       PR-004-openpkg-1.3.txt

  Log:
    marketing submission to propose rewrite of first section

  Summary:
    Revision    Changes     Path
    1.6         +17 -12     openpkg-web/press/PR-004-openpkg-1.3.txt
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  patch -p0 <<'@@ .'
  Index: openpkg-web/press/PR-004-openpkg-1.3.txt
  ============================================================================
  $ cvs diff -u -r1.5 -r1.6 PR-004-openpkg-1.3.txt
  --- openpkg-web/press/PR-004-openpkg-1.3.txt  31 Jul 2003 16:05:40 -0000      1.5
  +++ openpkg-web/press/PR-004-openpkg-1.3.txt  31 Jul 2003 19:42:38 -0000      1.6
  @@ -4,24 +4,29 @@
       The OpenPKG project releases version 1.3 of the
       unique cross-platform software packaging facility.
   
  -  http://www.openpkg.org/ -- Munich, DE -- August 08, 2003 -- The
  +  http://www.openpkg.org/ -- Munich, DE -- August 01, 2003 -- The
     OpenPKG project is proud to announce version 1.3 of its OpenPKG
  -  software. A flexible and powerful software packaging facility, OpenPKG
  -  eases the cross-platform installation and administration of Unix
     software.
   
  -  ...WORLD LEADING...
  +  Well known by vigilant Unix system administrators and widely adopted
  +  across the enterprise, OpenPKG is the prevalent instrument when it
  +  comes to deployment and maintenance of Open Source software.
   
  -  Consolidating different vendor approaches into a unified architecture,
  -  it serves system administrators of large networks previously burdened
  -  by different systems. OpenPKG leverages proven technologies like Red
  -  Hat Package Manager (RPM) and provides an additional system layer
  -  on top of the operating system. With OpenPKG, a unique method of
  -  cross-platform software deployment is taking form.
  +  The unique OpenPKG architecture leverages proven technologies like
  +  Red Hat Package Manager (RPM) to establish a unified environment
  +  independent of the underlying operating system. It is particularly
  +  useful in, but not limited to, setups where administration crosses
  +  Unix platform boundaries.
   
  -  Administrators using OpenPKG 1.3 benefit from official support on
  +  OpenPKG removes the burden from system operators to become acquainted
  +  with different vendor approaches and frees their valuable time to be
  +  spent on the actual work.
  +
  +  Administrators using OpenPKG 1.3 can expect official support on
     FreeBSD 4.8 and 5.1, Debian GNU/Linux 2.2 and 3.0, RedHat Linux 9,
  -  SuSE Linux 8.2, and Sun Solaris 8 and 9.
  +  SuSE Linux 8.2, and Sun Solaris 8 and 9. This is not an exhaustive
  +  list, other related platforms receive and benefit from partial
  +  support.
   
     NEW IN VERSION 1.3
   
  @@ .
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