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Server: cvs.openpkg.org Name: Michael Schloh
Root: /e/openpkg/cvs Email: [EMAIL PROTECTED]
Module: openpkg-web Date: 04-Aug-2003 11:27:35
Branch: HEAD Handle: 2003080410273500
Modified files:
openpkg-web/press PR-004-openpkg-1.3.txt
Log:
Text 'further on' is downright wrong in this context, 'further' is not wrong,
but leaving it out entirely is probably the best choice
Summary:
Revision Changes Path
1.18 +2 -2 openpkg-web/press/PR-004-openpkg-1.3.txt
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patch -p0 <<'@@ .'
Index: openpkg-web/press/PR-004-openpkg-1.3.txt
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$ cvs diff -u -r1.17 -r1.18 PR-004-openpkg-1.3.txt
--- openpkg-web/press/PR-004-openpkg-1.3.txt 4 Aug 2003 08:38:30 -0000 1.17
+++ openpkg-web/press/PR-004-openpkg-1.3.txt 4 Aug 2003 09:27:35 -0000 1.18
@@ -62,8 +62,8 @@
The OpenPKG project was founded in 2000 by Cable & Wireless, who first
released it as Open Source software in January 2002. Today OpenPKG is
- a mature technology in production use, and is further on maintained
- and improved by its original developers and volunteer contributors.
+ a mature technology in production use, and is maintained and improved
+ by its original developers and volunteer contributors.
OpenPKG is the brainchild of Ralf S. Engelschall, principal author of
numerous other popular Open Source Software technologies like Apache
@@ .
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