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  Server: cvs.openpkg.org                  Name:   Michael Schloh
  Root:   /e/openpkg/cvs                   Email:  [EMAIL PROTECTED]
  Module: openpkg-web                      Date:   20-Jan-2004 14:29:29
  Branch: HEAD                             Handle: 2004012013292900

  Modified files:
    openpkg-web             status.wml

  Log:
    Improve english usage and style

  Summary:
    Revision    Changes     Path
    1.8         +4  -4      openpkg-web/status.wml
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  patch -p0 <<'@@ .'
  Index: openpkg-web/status.wml
  ============================================================================
  $ cvs diff -u -r1.7 -r1.8 status.wml
  --- openpkg-web/status.wml    16 Sep 2003 10:21:12 -0000      1.7
  +++ openpkg-web/status.wml    20 Jan 2004 13:29:29 -0000      1.8
  @@ -15,7 +15,7 @@
   
   <p>
   The following hosts are currently part of the build procedure
  -and considered primary platforms on which we focus:
  +and are considered primary platforms on which we focus:
   <p>
   <box bgcolor="#a5a095" bdwidth=0 bdspace=1>
   <box bgcolor="#e5e0d5" bdcolor="#ffffff" bdwidth=1 bdspace=10>
  @@ -53,17 +53,17 @@
   <tr>
   <td bgcolor="#f0f099" align=center><img src="status.img/icon-dia.gif"></td>
   <td bgcolor="#999933" align=center><img src="status.img/icon-dia.gif"></td>
  -<td>package built ongoing</td>
  +<td>package build ongoing</td>
   </tr>
   <tr>
   <td bgcolor="#99cc99" align=center><img src="status.img/icon-ok.gif"></td>
   <td bgcolor="#336633" align=center><img src="status.img/icon-ok.gif"></td>
  -<td>package built successfully</td>
  +<td>package build successful</td>
   </tr>
   <tr>
   <td bgcolor="#9999ff" align=center><img src="status.img/icon-dot.gif"></td>
   <td bgcolor="#000066" align=center><img src="status.img/icon-dot.gif"></td>
  -<td>package not tried to build (mainly due to failed dependencies)</td>
  +<td>package build not attempted (mainly due to failed dependencies)</td>
   </tr>
   <tr>
   <td bgcolor="#ff9999" align=center><img src="status.img/icon-star.gif"></td>
  @@ .
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