Dennis Clarke wrote:

>I wrote this update such that new users would be able to follow really simple
>step by step instructions.
>
>    http://www.blastwave.org/articles/BLS-0050/index.html
>
>Let me know if anything out of order is in there.
>
>Thanks.
>
>  
>

Your article is very good and certainly helpful to beginners.
Maybe you should have the OpenSolaris wiki or site pointing to it.
I think it cannot be improved very much.

Only a few ideas:

0.)
Not everyone might have (gnu-) gtar installed on her/his box, before upgrading 
to Solaris Express.
Anyways, the following will always work

not

" /usr/sfw/bin/gtar -zxf $HOME/sunstudio11-ii-20060829-sol-x86.tar.Z "

but rather

" /usr/bin/uncompress -c $HOME/sunstudio11-ii-20060829-sol-x86.tar.Z | /bin/tar 
xvf - "

1.)
|" cat file-a.iso file-b.iso file-c.iso file-d.iso file-e.iso > sxcr.iso "
I assume, this was chosen (same or similar on Solaris download page) to make it 
clearer for newbies.

I nevertheless suggest to offer the shorter alternative (maybe with a quick 
explanation) to the more advanced users:

||" cat file-?.iso > sxcr.iso "
(or - depending on filenames ... )||
" cat file-*.iso > sxcr.iso "

Yet another detail: The individual parts to be concatenated later on, normally 
never end in ".iso" but rather in "_iso".
That's at least a good practice.
And that's how it should have been stated when splitting the complete iso with 
"split", in advance.


M.
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