On Fri, 2012-05-18 at 14:23 +0200, Bruno Friedmann wrote: > On Thursday 17 May 2012 19.15:50 Lars Vogdt wrote: > > Hi Marketing Team! > > > > I know that 6 June 2012 is a long, long day in the future, but > > nevertheless, the preparation is going on and as we are already > > supporting IPv6 since a year now, I guess spending some marketing > > efforts in this area will give us an easy win. > > > > I already added openSUSE and openSUSE-Education as IPv6 participants > > on the list of the Internet Society ( > > www.worldipv6launch.org/participants/ ) and now I also prepared some > > Newsletter for our users here: > > http://news.opensuse.org/?p=13372&preview=true > > > > If someone finds the time to go through my ugly English there and > > maybe enhance the text with some additional information, I would > > really appreciate this. > > > > I want to give the time for the release on news.opensuse.org in your > > hands - just find a suitable date and click on the button, Admins. > > > > Thanks in advance, > > Lars > > Thanks for your efforts Lars to promote the future of internet. > And tell people that Geeko is ready for that. > > As review I would said okay perhaps just removing capital on preferred > Operating System > operating system ... > I think this is okay to leave it capitalized. It is functioning as a Pronoun in this case rather than generic operating system.
Couple of other minor edits: First sentence "As last year,... " should be "Like last year,..." As last year says that you *are* 2011. :-) Second paragraph "openSUSE shows again it’s readiness" change it's to its. Other than that, I think its good to go! :-) Bryen > > > -- > Bruno Friedmann > Ioda-Net Sàrl www.ioda-net.ch > > openSUSE Member & Ambassador > GPG KEY : D5C9B751C4653227 > irc: tigerfoot -- To unsubscribe, e-mail: opensuse-marketing+unsubscr...@opensuse.org To contact the owner, e-mail: opensuse-marketing+ow...@opensuse.org
