Hi, I have reviewed this document and I support it moving forward. There are a couple of nits that should be fixed before submitting the document to the IESG.
Section 7.1: - replace "MIB" with "MIB module" Section 7.2: - replace "The SNMP Management Architecture MIB (SNMP-FRAMEWORK-MIB)" with "SNMP-FRAMEWORK-MIB" - remove "Therefore, the use of the HMAC-SHA2 authentication protocols requires the usage of the objects defined in the SNMP-FRAMEWORK-MIB." since this sentence is not needed Section 7.3: - replace "IMPORTS objects" with "IMPORTS definitions" Section 8: - The comment behind LAST-UPDATED is wrong (this happens once there is redundant information) - The DESCRIPTION clause of the MODULE-IDENTITY macro says that there is supplementary information at IANA. I am not sure what this means. Perhaps this last paragraph needs to be changed to what other recent MIB modules include, namely a short version of the copyright statement. See for example RFC 7331. - This may be wrong: usmHMAC384SHA12AuthProtocol (a 5 missing) - The MIB modules compiles using smilint after fixing the RFC Ed. comments below the definition of usmHMAC256SHA384AuthProtocol and usmHMAC384SHA12AuthProtocol. Section 9.1: - I think this sentence should be changed to this: The security considerations of [RFC3414] also apply to the HMAC-SHA-2 authentication protocols defined in this document. /js -- Juergen Schoenwaelder Jacobs University Bremen gGmbH Phone: +49 421 200 3587 Campus Ring 1 | 28759 Bremen | Germany Fax: +49 421 200 3103 <http://www.jacobs-university.de/> _______________________________________________ OPSAWG mailing list OPSAWG@ietf.org https://www.ietf.org/mailman/listinfo/opsawg
