Hi Thomas, all, I made a shepherd review of the document. The review can be found at:
* pdf: https://github.com/boucadair/IETF-Drafts-Reviews/blob/master/draft-ietf-drip-reqs-06-rev%20Med.pdf * doc: https://github.com/boucadair/IETF-Drafts-Reviews/raw/master/draft-ietf-drip-reqs-06-rev%20Med.docx Almost all the comments are minor. These are basically to enhance the readability of the document (shorten long sentences, etc.) and make idnits happy. There is one "procedural" comment that it is better to discuss now as I suspect it will pop up in the process: Why the document is in the "Standard Track"? I failed to see any valid reason especially that: * The IANA policy for the target registry is Expert Review. * We don't have any normative statements in the document. Are there any reasons why the document should be in "Standards Track"? Once these comments are fixed, I will start preparing the write-up. Thank you. Cheers, Med _________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ Ce message et ses pieces jointes peuvent contenir des informations confidentielles ou privilegiees et ne doivent donc pas etre diffuses, exploites ou copies sans autorisation. Si vous avez recu ce message par erreur, veuillez le signaler a l'expediteur et le detruire ainsi que les pieces jointes. Les messages electroniques etant susceptibles d'alteration, Orange decline toute responsabilite si ce message a ete altere, deforme ou falsifie. Merci. This message and its attachments may contain confidential or privileged information that may be protected by law; they should not be distributed, used or copied without authorisation. If you have received this email in error, please notify the sender and delete this message and its attachments. As emails may be altered, Orange is not liable for messages that have been modified, changed or falsified. Thank you.
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