Lars Eggert has entered the following ballot position for draft-ietf-opsawg-l3sm-l3nm-11: No Objection
When responding, please keep the subject line intact and reply to all email addresses included in the To and CC lines. (Feel free to cut this introductory paragraph, however.) Please refer to https://www.ietf.org/iesg/statement/discuss-criteria.html for more information about DISCUSS and COMMENT positions. The document, along with other ballot positions, can be found here: https://datatracker.ietf.org/doc/draft-ietf-opsawg-l3sm-l3nm/ ---------------------------------------------------------------------- COMMENT: ---------------------------------------------------------------------- It would be useful to summarize this document's relationship to RFC8299 in the abstract. ------------------------------------------------------------------------------- All comments below are about very minor potential issues that you may choose to address in some way - or ignore - as you see fit. Some were flagged by automated tools (via https://github.com/larseggert/ietf-reviewtool), so there will likely be some false positives. There is no need to let me know what you did with these suggestions. Section 7.6.3. , paragraph 43, nit: > icates which BFD flavor is used to setup the session (e.g., classic BFD [RFC > ^^^^^ The verb "set up" is spelled as two words. The noun "setup" is spelled as one. Section 7.7. , paragraph 1, nit: > y applicable if both RP redundancy and and delivery through optimal path are > ^^^^^^^ Possible typo: you repeated a word. Section 8. , paragraph 8, nit: > VPLS and, VXLAN. Other values may defined, if needed."; leaf type { type ide > ^^^^^^^ The modal verb "may" requires the verb's base form. Section 8. , paragraph 32, nit: > cription "Reference to the TCP-AO key chain."; reference "RFC 8177: YANG Key > ^^^^^^^^^ This word is normally spelled as one. Section 8. , paragraph 32, nit: > description "Reference to the MD5 key chain."; reference "RFC 8177: YANG Key > ^^^^^^^^^ This word is normally spelled as one. Section 8. , paragraph 32, nit: > f; description "Customer-supplied key chain."; } } } } } container service { > ^^^^^^^^^ This word is normally spelled as one. Section 8. , paragraph 32, nit: > cast static source/group associated to to IGMP session"; leaf group-addr { ty > ^^^^^ Possible typo: you repeated a word. Document references draft-ietf-opsawg-vpn-common-09, but -10 is the latest available revision. Obsolete reference to RFC4447, obsoleted by RFC8077 (this may be on purpose). These URLs point to tools.ietf.org, which is being deprecated: * http://tools.ietf.org/wg/opsawg/ _______________________________________________ OPSAWG mailing list OPSAWG@ietf.org https://www.ietf.org/mailman/listinfo/opsawg
