Useful comments, thanks Tom. Authors, please run idnits and fix issues. Also address Tom's comments.
I'll be doing my shepherd review this week. Hopefully you can post a new revision when the gates open next Monday. Cheers, Adrian -----Original Message----- From: tom petch <ie...@btconnect.com> Sent: 01 November 2021 12:48 To: mohamed.boucad...@orange.com; opsawg@ietf.org Cc: adr...@olddog.co.uk Subject: Re: I-D Action: draft-ietf-opsawg-l2nm-09.txt From: OPSAWG <opsawg-boun...@ietf.org> on behalf of mohamed.boucad...@orange.com <mohamed.boucad...@orange.com> Sent: 20 October 2021 09:49 Hi all, After discussing with Adrian, we are publishing this version that addresses a recent comment from Julian. For more context, please refer to https://github.com/IETF-OPSAWG-WG/lxnm/issues/350. <tp> Some stray thoughts some lines are 90 characters long 802.1ah is referenced but not in I-D References 802.3ah ditto 802.1ag Amendment 5 looks like a separate document warranting a separate reference 802.1p is referenced implicitly 802.1Q likewise What is the difference between identity bgp-l2encaps-type Base BGP L2 encapsulation type and identity iana-pw-types Base BGP L2 encapsulation type ccm-priority-type what is high what low? Local Maintenance End Point (MEP) This is not the expansion used by the ITU-T leaf split-horizon-filtering what does true mean? leaf ccm-interval no units leaf ccm-holdtime no units leaf duplicate-ip-detection-interval no units leaf duplicate-ip-detection-interval no units Tom Petch Cheers, Med > -----Message d'origine----- > De : I-D-Announce <i-d-announce-boun...@ietf.org> De la part de internet- > dra...@ietf.org > Envoyé : mercredi 20 octobre 2021 10:34 > À : i-d-annou...@ietf.org > Cc : opsawg@ietf.org > Objet : I-D Action: draft-ietf-opsawg-l2nm-09.txt > > > A New Internet-Draft is available from the on-line Internet-Drafts > directories. > This draft is a work item of the Operations and Management Area Working > Group WG of the IETF. > > Title : A Layer 2 VPN Network YANG Model > Authors : Samier Barguil > Oscar Gonzalez de Dios > Mohamed Boucadair > Luis Angel Munoz > Filename : draft-ietf-opsawg-l2nm-09.txt > Pages : 155 > Date : 2021-10-20 > > Abstract: > This document defines an L2VPN Network YANG Model (L2NM) that can be > used to manage the provisioning of Layer 2 Virtual Private Network > (VPN) services within a network (e.g., service provider network). > The L2NM complements the Layer 2 Service Model (L2SM) by providing a > network-centric view of the service that is internal to a service > providers. The L2NM is particularly meant to be used by a network > controller to derive the configuration information that will be sent > to relevant network devices. > > Also, the document defines the initial versions of two IANA- > maintained modules that defines a set of identities of BGP Layer 2 > encapsulation types and pseudowire types. > > > The IETF datatracker status page for this draft is: > https://datatracker.ietf.org/doc/draft-ietf-opsawg-l2nm/ > > There is also an htmlized version available at: > https://datatracker.ietf.org/doc/html/draft-ietf-opsawg-l2nm-09 > > A diff from the previous version is available at: > https://www.ietf.org/rfcdiff?url2=draft-ietf-opsawg-l2nm-09 > > > Internet-Drafts are also available by anonymous FTP at: > ftp://ftp.ietf.org/internet-drafts/ > > > _______________________________________________ > I-D-Announce mailing list > i-d-annou...@ietf.org > https://www.ietf.org/mailman/listinfo/i-d-announce > Internet-Draft directories: http://www.ietf.org/shadow.html or > ftp://ftp.ietf.org/ietf/1shadow-sites.txt ____________________________________________________________________________ _____________________________________________ Ce message et ses pieces jointes peuvent contenir des informations confidentielles ou privilegiees et ne doivent donc pas etre diffuses, exploites ou copies sans autorisation. Si vous avez recu ce message par erreur, veuillez le signaler a l'expediteur et le detruire ainsi que les pieces jointes. Les messages electroniques etant susceptibles d'alteration, Orange decline toute responsabilite si ce message a ete altere, deforme ou falsifie. Merci. This message and its attachments may contain confidential or privileged information that may be protected by law; they should not be distributed, used or copied without authorisation. If you have received this email in error, please notify the sender and delete this message and its attachments. As emails may be altered, Orange is not liable for messages that have been modified, changed or falsified. Thank you. _______________________________________________ OPSAWG mailing list OPSAWG@ietf.org https://www.ietf.org/mailman/listinfo/opsawg = _______________________________________________ OPSAWG mailing list OPSAWG@ietf.org https://www.ietf.org/mailman/listinfo/opsawg
