Hi Murray,
Thanks for the comment.
I suggest we go for these changes:
(1) Section 3
OLD:
Before using the model, the controller needs to establish topology
visibility of the network and VPN. For example, the controller can
use network information from [RFC8345], [I-D.ietf-opsawg-sap] or VPN
information from [RFC9182], [RFC9291].
NEW:
Before using the model, the controller needs to establish topology
visibility of the network and VPN. For example, the controller can
use network information from [RFC8345], [I-D.ietf-opsawg-sap], or VPN
information from the L3VPN Network Model (L3NM) [RFC9182] and
the L2VPN Network Model (L2NM) [RFC9291].
(2) Section 4
OLD:
VPN network access ("vpn-network-access"): Lists counters of the VPN
network access defined in [RFC9182] or [RFC9291].
NEW:
VPN network access ("vpn-network-access"): Lists counters of the VPN
network access defined in the L3NM [RFC9182] or the L2NM [RFC9291].
Cheers,
Med
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