Hi Mohamed, Many thanks for your review and good comments. After the IETF #116 OPSA WG and discussions on the inventory email alias/NIMBY new charter discussions; we understand that there is work to do and we are reviewing the YANG modules being part of DMLMO, including structure; we are already starting to work on the next review, and we are considering all your comments/notes.
Many thanks, Marisol Re: [OPSAWG] WG adoption call for draft-palmero-opsawg-dmlmo-09 mohamed.boucad...@orange.com<mailto:mohamed.boucad...@orange.com> Fri, 17 March 2023 14:54 UTCShow header<https://mailarchive.ietf.org/arch/browse/opsawg/?q=dmlmo> Hi all, FWIW, please find below a review of this draft: * pdf: https://github.com/boucadair/IETF-Drafts-Reviews/raw/master/draft-palmero-opsawg-dmlmo-09-rev%20Med.pdf * doc: https://github.com/boucadair/IETF-Drafts-Reviews/raw/master/draft-palmero-opsawg-dmlmo-09-rev%20Med.doc I support the overall effort to provide a common (set of) model(s) to complement existing the in-house tools (e.g., industrialize collection of EoL/EoS) with the hope that inventory data is not kept stale and that it is actively updated. However, I think that some more effort is needed to better scope this work. I don't think that the document is ready in its current state. Some "diet" effort is needed to keep only core components and offload other parts to future/companion extensions. I have also many comments on the yang structure itself (lack of structure types, abuse of string, lack of meaningful descriptions, etc.), but I guess these can be fixed once the high level concern is handled. Aaah, rather than "Cisco and Ohers", I suggest you simply rely in the PEN registry. Here is an example: leaf vendor-id { type uint32; description "The Vendor ID is a security vendor's Private Enterprise Number as registered with IANA."; reference "IANA: Private Enterprise Numbers (https://www.iana.org/assignments/enterprise-numbers/)"<https://www.iana.org/assignments/enterprise-numbers/)%22>; } Thank you. Cheers, Med
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