Hi Thomas,

I think there was a bug in -10:

s/5.1.9.1.  IPFIX IPv6 SRH Segment Type Subregistry/5.2  IPFIX IPv6 SRH Segment 
Type Subregistry


Also, for this text: 

  The allocation policy of this new subregistry is Expert Review        
  (Section 4.5 of [RFC8126]) by SRH Experts.

I don't think we need to have ".. by SRH Experts" mentioned here given that the 
assigned DEs for this subregistry are IMO required to be familiar with SRH.

If you think this is obvious and has to be recorded in the draft, I suggest the 
following: 

(1)

OLD 
  The allocation policy of this new subregistry is Expert Review        
  (Section 4.5 of [RFC8126]) by SRH Experts.

NEW:
  The allocation policy of this new subregistry is Expert Review        
  (Section 4.5 of [RFC8126]).

(2)

OLD: 
  The guidelines that are being followed by the designated experts for ...

NEW:
 The designed experts for this registry should be familiar with SRH.
 The guidelines that are being followed by the designated experts for ..


Thanks. 

Cheers,
Med

> -----Message d'origine-----
> De : I-D-Announce <i-d-announce-boun...@ietf.org> De la part de
> internet-dra...@ietf.org
> Envoyé : jeudi 18 mai 2023 13:11
> À : i-d-annou...@ietf.org
> Cc : opsawg@ietf.org
> Objet : I-D Action: draft-ietf-opsawg-ipfix-srv6-srh-10.txt
> 
> 
> A New Internet-Draft is available from the on-line Internet-Drafts
> directories. This Internet-Draft is a work item of the Operations
> and Management Area Working Group (OPSAWG) WG of the IETF.
> 
>    Title           : Export of Segment Routing over IPv6
> Information in IP Flow Information Export (IPFIX)
>    Authors         : Thomas Graf
>                      Benoit Claise
>                      Pierre Francois
>    Filename        : draft-ietf-opsawg-ipfix-srv6-srh-10.txt
>    Pages           : 28
>    Date            : 2023-05-18
> 
> Abstract:
>    This document introduces new IP Flow Information Export (IPFIX)
>    Information Elements to identify a set of Segment Routing over
> IPv6
>    (SRv6) related information such as data contained in a Segment
>    Routing Header (SRH), the SRv6 control plane, and the SRv6
> endpoint
>    behavior that traffic is being forwarded with.
> 
> The IETF datatracker status page for this Internet-Draft is:
> https://eur03.safelinks.protection.outlook.com/?url=https%3A%2F%2F
> datatracker.ietf.org%2Fdoc%2Fdraft-ietf-opsawg-ipfix-srv6-
> srh%2F&data=05%7C01%7Cmohamed.boucadair%40orange.com%7Cddcd5d8eceb
> 64928d33308db5790ac5b%7C90c7a20af34b40bfbc48b9253b6f5d20%7C0%7C0%7
> C638200051102993802%7CUnknown%7CTWFpbGZsb3d8eyJWIjoiMC4wLjAwMDAiLC
> JQIjoiV2luMzIiLCJBTiI6Ik1haWwiLCJXVCI6Mn0%3D%7C3000%7C%7C%7C&sdata
> =Q%2Fl7cb4MQj4Jj4bSm4fRySHmkdnPdIkrmWIcoEUPpZ0%3D&reserved=0
> 
> There is also an htmlized version available at:
> https://eur03.safelinks.protection.outlook.com/?url=https%3A%2F%2F
> datatracker.ietf.org%2Fdoc%2Fhtml%2Fdraft-ietf-opsawg-ipfix-srv6-
> srh-
> 10&data=05%7C01%7Cmohamed.boucadair%40orange.com%7Cddcd5d8eceb6492
> 8d33308db5790ac5b%7C90c7a20af34b40bfbc48b9253b6f5d20%7C0%7C0%7C638
> 200051102993802%7CUnknown%7CTWFpbGZsb3d8eyJWIjoiMC4wLjAwMDAiLCJQIj
> oiV2luMzIiLCJBTiI6Ik1haWwiLCJXVCI6Mn0%3D%7C3000%7C%7C%7C&sdata=QsD
> 1F2oq5TSKove3Rx4UtUJcaOYSH16GK%2FATo%2FRxbw8%3D&reserved=0
> 
> A diff from the previous version is available at:
> https://eur03.safelinks.protection.outlook.com/?url=https%3A%2F%2F
> author-tools.ietf.org%2Fiddiff%3Furl2%3Ddraft-ietf-opsawg-ipfix-
> srv6-srh-
> 10&data=05%7C01%7Cmohamed.boucadair%40orange.com%7Cddcd5d8eceb6492
> 8d33308db5790ac5b%7C90c7a20af34b40bfbc48b9253b6f5d20%7C0%7C0%7C638
> 200051102993802%7CUnknown%7CTWFpbGZsb3d8eyJWIjoiMC4wLjAwMDAiLCJQIj
> oiV2luMzIiLCJBTiI6Ik1haWwiLCJXVCI6Mn0%3D%7C3000%7C%7C%7C&sdata=928
> QZUj8oeWXbhOMlNfGO2Iuq0oRi%2BXa2TyiPiMOg6w%3D&reserved=0
> 
> Internet-Drafts are also available by rsync at
> rsync.ietf.org::internet-drafts
> 
> 
> _______________________________________________
> I-D-Announce mailing list
> i-d-annou...@ietf.org
> https://eur03.safelinks.protection.outlook.com/?url=https%3A%2F%2F
> www.ietf.org%2Fmailman%2Flistinfo%2Fi-d-
> announce&data=05%7C01%7Cmohamed.boucadair%40orange.com%7Cddcd5d8ec
> eb64928d33308db5790ac5b%7C90c7a20af34b40bfbc48b9253b6f5d20%7C0%7C0
> %7C638200051102993802%7CUnknown%7CTWFpbGZsb3d8eyJWIjoiMC4wLjAwMDAi
> LCJQIjoiV2luMzIiLCJBTiI6Ik1haWwiLCJXVCI6Mn0%3D%7C3000%7C%7C%7C&sda
> ta=0dcX9zxNW6fwkPIn2ajcwOemaKPAIfx38txGwgA8LzU%3D&reserved=0
> Internet-Draft directories:
> https://eur03.safelinks.protection.outlook.com/?url=http%3A%2F%2Fw
> ww.ietf.org%2Fshadow.html&data=05%7C01%7Cmohamed.boucadair%40orang
> e.com%7Cddcd5d8eceb64928d33308db5790ac5b%7C90c7a20af34b40bfbc48b92
> 53b6f5d20%7C0%7C0%7C638200051102993802%7CUnknown%7CTWFpbGZsb3d8eyJ
> WIjoiMC4wLjAwMDAiLCJQIjoiV2luMzIiLCJBTiI6Ik1haWwiLCJXVCI6Mn0%3D%7C
> 3000%7C%7C%7C&sdata=K0TVBDegU0uNjBh1%2B9%2Fex38zOIYdWUoctE5kFja5I6
> A%3D&reserved=0
> or
> https://eur03.safelinks.protection.outlook.com/?url=ftp%3A%2F%2Fft
> p.ietf.org%2Fietf%2F1shadow-
> sites.txt&data=05%7C01%7Cmohamed.boucadair%40orange.com%7Cddcd5d8e
> ceb64928d33308db5790ac5b%7C90c7a20af34b40bfbc48b9253b6f5d20%7C0%7C
> 0%7C638200051102993802%7CUnknown%7CTWFpbGZsb3d8eyJWIjoiMC4wLjAwMDA
> iLCJQIjoiV2luMzIiLCJBTiI6Ik1haWwiLCJXVCI6Mn0%3D%7C3000%7C%7C%7C&sd
> ata=X2h87uDdsAlnQq1ToQ3a8B49cYr8hvVbxEiWY7C%2BxhI%3D&reserved=0

_________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________

Ce message et ses pieces jointes peuvent contenir des informations 
confidentielles ou privilegiees et ne doivent donc
pas etre diffuses, exploites ou copies sans autorisation. Si vous avez recu ce 
message par erreur, veuillez le signaler
a l'expediteur et le detruire ainsi que les pieces jointes. Les messages 
electroniques etant susceptibles d'alteration,
Orange decline toute responsabilite si ce message a ete altere, deforme ou 
falsifie. Merci.

This message and its attachments may contain confidential or privileged 
information that may be protected by law;
they should not be distributed, used or copied without authorisation.
If you have received this email in error, please notify the sender and delete 
this message and its attachments.
As emails may be altered, Orange is not liable for messages that have been 
modified, changed or falsified.
Thank you.

_______________________________________________
OPSAWG mailing list
OPSAWG@ietf.org
https://www.ietf.org/mailman/listinfo/opsawg

Reply via email to