Many thanks Med for your comments and suggestions, We will incorporate them in the next release of the draft, as well as addressing your note of being more descriptive for the use cases.
Looking forward to discussing further on this new approach and get more constructive feedback as part of the preparations and IETF 117 WG meetings. Marisol Palmero From: mohamed.boucad...@orange.com <mohamed.boucad...@orange.com> Date: Wednesday, 5 July 2023 at 16:42 To: Marisol Palmero Amador (mpalmero) <mpalm...@cisco.com>, opsawg@ietf.org <opsawg@ietf.org> Cc: Sudhendu Kumar <skuma...@ncsu.edu>, Camilo Cardona <cam...@ntt.net> Subject: RE: New Version Notification for draft-palmero-opsawg-ps-almo-00.txt Hi Marisol, all, Thank you for sharing this version. I like much this new version/approach/scope of the draft compared to the dmlmo draft I reviewed early this year. I expect more concrete description to be added to some of the use cases, but I trust that is something you can manage in the next iteration of the draft. FWIW, please find some few edits/comments at: * pdf: https://github.com/boucadair/IETF-Drafts-Reviews/blob/master/draft-palmero-opsawg-ps-almo-00-rev%20Med.pdf * doc: https://github.com/boucadair/IETF-Drafts-Reviews/raw/master/draft-palmero-opsawg-ps-almo-00-rev%20Med.doc Cheers, Med De : OPSAWG <opsawg-boun...@ietf.org> De la part de Marisol Palmero Amador (mpalmero) Envoyé : vendredi 30 juin 2023 02:23 À : opsawg@ietf.org Cc : Sudhendu Kumar <skuma...@ncsu.edu>; Camilo Cardona <cam...@ntt.net> Objet : [OPSAWG] Fwd: New Version Notification for draft-palmero-opsawg-ps-almo-00.txt Dear OPSA WG, We've just posted a new draft that presents a problem statement for assets lifecycle management and operations. It describes motivation and introduces an information model proposal for the main modules that are part of DMLMO<https://datatracker.ietf.org/doc/draft-palmero-opsawg-dmlmo/>. The new draft https://datatracker.ietf.org/doc/draft-palmero-opsawg-ps-almo/ intents to simplify the objective and understanding of DMLMO with a focus on the framework and the main functional models. We greatly appreciate your thoughts and comments. Many thanks, Marisol Palmero, on behalf of the authors. From: internet-dra...@ietf.org<mailto:internet-dra...@ietf.org> <internet-dra...@ietf.org<mailto:internet-dra...@ietf.org>> Date: Friday, 30 June 2023 at 02:06 To: Camilo Cardona <cam...@ntt.net<mailto:cam...@ntt.net>>, Diego R. Lopez <diego.r.lo...@telefonica.com<mailto:diego.r.lo...@telefonica.com>>, Frank Brockners (fbrockne) <fbroc...@cisco.com<mailto:fbroc...@cisco.com>>, Marisol Palmero Amador (mpalmero) <mpalm...@cisco.com<mailto:mpalm...@cisco.com>>, Sudhendu Kumar <skuma...@ncsu.edu<mailto:skuma...@ncsu.edu>> Subject: New Version Notification for draft-palmero-opsawg-ps-almo-00.txt A new version of I-D, draft-palmero-opsawg-ps-almo-00.txt has been successfully submitted by Marisol Palmero and posted to the IETF repository. Name: draft-palmero-opsawg-ps-almo Revision: 00 Title: Asset Lifecycle Management and Operations, Problem Statement Document date: 2023-06-29 Group: Individual Submission Pages: 12 URL: https://www.ietf.org/archive/id/draft-palmero-opsawg-ps-almo-00.txt Status: https://datatracker.ietf.org/doc/draft-palmero-opsawg-ps-almo/ Htmlized: https://datatracker.ietf.org/doc/html/draft-palmero-opsawg-ps-almo Abstract: This document presents a problem statement for assets lifecycle management and operations. It describes the framework, the motivation and requirements for asset-centric metrics including but not limited to asset adoption, usability, entitlements, supported features and capabilities, enabled features and capabilities. An information model is proposed whose primary objective is to measure and improve the network operators' experience along the lifecycle journey, from technical requirements and technology selection through renewal, including the end of life of an asset. The IETF Secretariat ____________________________________________________________________________________________________________ Ce message et ses pieces jointes peuvent contenir des informations confidentielles ou privilegiees et ne doivent donc pas etre diffuses, exploites ou copies sans autorisation. Si vous avez recu ce message par erreur, veuillez le signaler a l'expediteur et le detruire ainsi que les pieces jointes. Les messages electroniques etant susceptibles d'alteration, Orange decline toute responsabilite si ce message a ete altere, deforme ou falsifie. Merci. This message and its attachments may contain confidential or privileged information that may be protected by law; they should not be distributed, used or copied without authorisation. If you have received this email in error, please notify the sender and delete this message and its attachments. As emails may be altered, Orange is not liable for messages that have been modified, changed or falsified. Thank you.
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