Reviewer: Joel Halpern Review result: Ready with Issues I am the assigned Gen-ART reviewer for this draft. The General Area Review Team (Gen-ART) reviews all IETF documents being processed by the IESG for the IETF Chair. Please treat these comments just like any other last call comments.
For more information, please see the FAQ at <https://wiki.ietf.org/en/group/gen/GenArtFAQ>. Document: draft-ietf-opsawg-ipfix-tcpo-v6eh-11 Reviewer: Joel Halpern Review Date: 2024-05-02 IETF LC End Date: 2024-05-10 IESG Telechat date: Not scheduled for a telechat Summary: This document is ready for publication as a Proposed Standard RFC Major issues: None Minor issues: The document uses the phrasing "If several extension header chains are observed in a Flow" in several places. While I believe I figured out what was intended, it caused me difficulty. Assuming I understood the intent, I would suggest defining a term "flow with varying header chain" as "a flow wherein different packets in the flow have a different sequence of extension header types codes." And then use that term in the suitable places in the document. Nits/editorial comments: None _______________________________________________ OPSAWG mailing list OPSAWG@ietf.org https://www.ietf.org/mailman/listinfo/opsawg
