Hi Paul, Following up on this document as well.
Thank you for performing the reviews. Best regards, David Dong IANA Services Sr. Specialist On Tue May 14 12:48:27 2024, mohamed.boucad...@orange.com wrote: > Hi Paul, > > The new version with all received reviews and comments is available > at: https://datatracker.ietf.org/doc/draft-ietf-opsawg-tsvwg-udp- > ipfix/ > > Please see inline. > > Cheers, > Med > > De : Aitken, Paul <pait...@ciena.com> > Envoyé : lundi 13 mai 2024 21:53 > À : BOUCADAIR Mohamed INNOV/NET <mohamed.boucad...@orange.com>; > drafts-expert-review-comm...@iana.org > Cc : ie-doct...@ietf.org; opsawg <opsawg@ietf.org> > Objet : RE: [Ie-doctors] [IANA #1363824] Expert review for draft-ietf- > opsawg-tsvwg-udp-ipfix (ipfix) > > > Med, > > In the new version: > > > 4.1. The first 64 most-significant bits MUST be set to 0. > > This seems to exclude reduced size encoding. > [Med] These will be seen as leading zeros and will thus be reduced. > However, I went with a unsigned192 rather than unsiggned256 for this > IE > > > Also, "while Kind 255 corresponds to the most-significant bit of the > IE." is nolonger accurate. > [Med] Yes, changed to “191” > > > > 4.2 udpUnsfaeOptions > > Typo: udpUnsafeOptions > > [Med] Fixed. > > > 4.1 and 4.2: > > A bit is set to 1 > > should be "The bit is set to 1". > [Med] OK > > > > 5. Operational Considerations > > The note about reduced-size encoding will not be seen in IANA's > registry. > [Med] I moved that because this was a comment from Benoît to remove > the reduced-size encoding from the description. > > The note seems contrary to the statement in 4.1 that I quoted above. > [Med] That statement was removed. > > > Figure 4: > > Repeating two points that I made previously: > > [Med] Fixed. > > The last 0x9858 (next to 0xC3D9) should be 0x9658. Else the figure > does not correspond with the preceding text. > > 9658 and 9858 are unnecessarily similar values. I would urge you to > choose a different example. > > P. > ____________________________________________________________________________________________________________ > Ce message et ses pieces jointes peuvent contenir des informations > confidentielles ou privilegiees et ne doivent donc > pas etre diffuses, exploites ou copies sans autorisation. Si vous avez > recu ce message par erreur, veuillez le signaler > a l'expediteur et le detruire ainsi que les pieces jointes. Les > messages electroniques etant susceptibles d'alteration, > Orange decline toute responsabilite si ce message a ete altere, > deforme ou falsifie. Merci. > > This message and its attachments may contain confidential or > privileged information that may be protected by law; > they should not be distributed, used or copied without authorisation. > If you have received this email in error, please notify the sender and > delete this message and its attachments. > As emails may be altered, Orange is not liable for messages that have > been modified, changed or falsified. > Thank you. _______________________________________________ OPSAWG mailing list -- opsawg@ietf.org To unsubscribe send an email to opsawg-le...@ietf.org
