Document: draft-ietf-opsawg-ucl-acl
Title: A YANG Data Model and RADIUS Extension for Policy-based Network Access
Control Reviewer: Dhruv Dhody Review result: Has Nits

Hi,

I have been selected as the Operational Directorate (opsdir) reviewer for this
Internet-Draft. I did an early review on -08 -
https://datatracker.ietf.org/doc/review-ietf-opsawg-ucl-acl-08-opsdir-early-dhody-2025-10-06/;
I have verified the diff.

The Operational Directorate reviews all operational and management-related
Internet-Drafts to ensure alignment with operational best practices and that
adequate operational considerations are covered.

A complete set of _"Guidelines for Considering Operations and Management in
IETF Specifications"_ can be found at
https://datatracker.ietf.org/doc/draft-ietf-opsawg-rfc5706bis/.

While these comments are primarily for the Operations and Management Area
Directors (Ops ADs), the authors should consider them alongside other feedback
received.

- Document: draft-ietf-opsawg-ucl-acl-11

- Reviewer: Dhruv Dhody

- Review Date: 2026-01-26

- Intended Status: Standards Track

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## Summary

Choose one:

- Has Nits: This document is basically ready for publication but has nits that
should be considered prior to publication.

## General Operational Comments Alignment with RFC 5706bis

The draft includes an Operational Considerations with key focus areas which
seems acceptable for this document.

## Major Issues

No major issues found.

## Minor Issues

No Minor issues found.

## Nits

- Section 2, formatting issue with device group and Application group.

Thanks!
Dhruv


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