I agree with the comments about "Hearing our voices for today... and tomorrow" being the more "gut grabbing" of the two. There is something in that (or in the story of how your group came to that), however, that loses some power because it is dependent upon others doing the hearing. If there is a way to incorporate that idea into a statement that speaks to what we will (because we have control and can) do, I believe it can be even more powerful. Perhaps something like "giving voice to our dreams for today... and tomorrow"?
Anyway-- just a thought! --BJ "J. Paul Everett" wrote: > In a message dated 9/6/01 9:48:16 PM, cor...@interchange.ubc.ca writes: > > << The whole notion of giving voice to the real concers of Aboriginal youth > rather than feedback on a government strategy is what drew people in by their > guts. >> > > Damn fine!! Let us know how it comes out!! I think the one on "Hearing our > voices for today......and tomorrow" is stronger than the latter one. I > presume "hearing" means acting on. If it doesn't, then maybe "Acting On Our > Voiced Priorities Now!!---and in the future" would be what is really wanted. > Just another idea. > > Paul > > * > * > ========================================================== > osl...@listserv.boisestate.edu > ------------------------------ > To subscribe, unsubscribe, change your options, > view the archives of osl...@listserv.boisestate.edu, > Visit: > > http://listserv.boisestate.edu/archives/oslist.html * * ========================================================== osl...@listserv.boisestate.edu ------------------------------ To subscribe, unsubscribe, change your options, view the archives of osl...@listserv.boisestate.edu, Visit: http://listserv.boisestate.edu/archives/oslist.html
