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Christoph Wickert <cwick...@fedoraproject.org> changed:

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--- Comment #41 from Christoph Wickert <cwick...@fedoraproject.org> 2010-02-16 
20:13:35 EST ---
The spec could be more readable if it was formatted properly. Please use line
breaks at 80 charakters, especially in the descriptions. Otherwise they are
hard to read on a terminal or in the PackageKit UI.

The name of the tag is "URL", not "Url".

The group of the -devel package should be Development/Libraries instead of
Applications/Internet. For the other subpackages you can omit the group tag
because it is the same than the one from the base package.

%descriptions should end with a dot. Exclamation marks are even worse than the
missing dots.

There are a lot of linguistic and grammar errors in the English descriptions.

The icon cache scriptlets are outdated, please use the latest version from 
https://fedoraproject.org/wiki/Packaging/ScriptletSnippets#Icon_Cache

Omit --add-category="Network" from desktop-file-install because this is already
in the file.

Please preserve timestamps during %install, 
install -p -m 644 icons/%{name}.png ...
...
make install DESTDIR="%{buildroot}" INSTALL="install -p"
see https://fedoraproject.org/wiki/Packaging/Guidelines#Timestamps

Please use %global instead of %define, see 
https://fedoraproject.org/wiki/Packaging/Guidelines#.25global_preferred_over_.25define
Just a hint, this is commented out currently.

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