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https://bugzilla.redhat.com/show_bug.cgi?id=733603

--- Comment #14 from Kalpa Welivitigoda <callka...@gmail.com> 2011-09-07 
09:56:42 EDT ---
(In reply to comment #13)
> Can you please change the summary of the package to not repeat the package
> name? 
> "A simple collection of measurement tools ..." or
> "Simple collection of measurement tools ..." is fine, too.
> 
> The summary on the other hand should be more verbose and can include the
> package name. I suggest 
> 
> "Ruler is a simple collection of measurement tools that are displayed on the
> screen. Since the OLPC XO computer has a 200 DPI display, the rulers are 
> quite 
> accurate. One other hardware, where the display resolution is not 
> known, their is a spinner to let the user set the DPI. Ruler saves 
> this value to the Journal, so it need not be set on subsequent uses 
> of the Activity."

I have modified the spec file and here are the new files,

Spec URL: http://callkalpa.fedorapeople.org/sugar-ruler/sugar-ruler.spec
SRPM URL:
http://callkalpa.fedorapeople.org/sugar-ruler/sugar-ruler-11-6.fc15.src.rpm

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