Currently, it could be misread to say that a fragment is literally
'commit', rather than 'commit=somehash'. Anecdotally this does not seem
to be obvious to everyone, and rewording it certainly doesn't hurt.

Signed-off-by: Eli Schwartz <[email protected]>
---
 doc/PKGBUILD.5.asciidoc | 6 +++---
 1 file changed, 3 insertions(+), 3 deletions(-)

diff --git a/doc/PKGBUILD.5.asciidoc b/doc/PKGBUILD.5.asciidoc
index bc5aa011..27d56a67 100644
--- a/doc/PKGBUILD.5.asciidoc
+++ b/doc/PKGBUILD.5.asciidoc
@@ -496,9 +496,9 @@ The source URL is divided into four components:
 
 *fragment*::
        (optional) Allows specifying a revision number or branch for makepkg to 
checkout
-       from the VCS. For example, to checkout a given revision, the source 
line would
-       have the format `source=(url#revision=123)`. The available fragments 
depends on
-       the VCS being used:
+       from the VCS. A fragment has the form `type=value`, for example to 
checkout a
+       given revision the source line would be `source=(url#revision=123)`. The
+       available types depends on the VCS being used:
 
        *bzr*;;
                revision (see `'bzr help revisionspec'` for details)
-- 
2.24.1

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