The proposed text works for me. Yoshihiro Ohba
On Thu, Apr 12, 2007 at 05:02:11PM +0200, MORAND Lionel RD-CORE-ISS wrote: > Hi again, > > In Section 4.1, it is stated: > > "A Nonce AVP MUST be included in the first non-initial > PANA-Auth-Request and PANA-Auth-Answer messages, and MUST NOT be > included in any other message." > > This wording is quite ambiguous as one may understand that the nonce is used > in only once within a PANA session while it will be actually used during each > re-authentication procedures. Besides, "first non-initial PANA-Auth-Request > and PANA-Auth-Answer messages" is unclear. > I propose the following text: > > "A Nonce AVP MUST be included in the first PANA-Auth-Request and > PANA-Auth-Answer messages following the initial PANA-Auth-Request > and PANA-Auth-Answer messages (i.e. with 'S' (Start) bit set), and MUST > NOT be included in any other message, except during re-authentication > procedures (see section 4.3)" > > Any comment? > > Lionel > > > -----Message d'origine----- > > De : Alper Yegin [mailto:[EMAIL PROTECTED] > > Envoyé : jeudi 5 avril 2007 10:06 > > À : [EMAIL PROTECTED] > > Objet : [Pana] Review pana-pana-15a > > > > > > PANA specification is reviewed based on the last round of AD > > comments (thanks Yoshi!). > > > > The spec is here: > > > > http://www.panasec.org/docs/editing/draft-ietf-pana-pana-15a.txt > > > > And it's diff with the version that predates last round of AD comments > > (-13): > > > > http://www.panasec.org/docs/editing/draft-ietf-pana-pana-15a-f > > rom-3.diff.htm > > l > > > > Please review the document and register your feedback by the > > end of April 12, Thursday. > > > > Upon collecting and resolving any issues, the document will > > proceed to IETF last call. > > > > Thanks > > > > Alper > > > > > > > > > > > > > > > > _______________________________________________ > > Pana mailing list > > [EMAIL PROTECTED] > > https://www1.ietf.org/mailman/listinfo/pana > > > > _______________________________________________ > Pana mailing list > [EMAIL PROTECTED] > https://www1.ietf.org/mailman/listinfo/pana > > _______________________________________________ Pana mailing list [EMAIL PROTECTED] https://www1.ietf.org/mailman/listinfo/pana
