On Mon, Apr 16, 2007 at 10:23:41AM -0400, Victor Fajardo wrote: > Hi Yoshi, > > I have one more minor comments. In Sec 8.2, I think we should add a > sentence "The AVP data is of type OctetString." to the AUTH AVP description.
Agreed. Let me also respond with your earlier comments: >1. In page 10, 2nd paragraph: > > >"..successfully derived, the last PANA-Auth-Request message MUST contain" > > >for clarity, maybe better as: > >"..successfully derived, the last PANA-Auth-Request message with 'C' >(Complete) bit set MUST contain ..." > > >also maybe the same can be applied in other text such as 5.3. Agreed. >2. Session Lifetime terminlogy, maybe we can add one sentence to the end of >the description to make >it clear that session timeout is also used in post access phase. > > > ...session lifetime can be updated by a new round of EAP > authentication before it expires. <add>For PANA session in the > authentication and authorization phase, it should be set to > a value that allows the PaC to detect a failed session in > a reasonable amount of time</add>. How about this? ...session lifetime can be updated by a new round of EAP authentication before it expires. <add> Until a PANA session is established, the lifetime SHOULD be set to a value that allows the PaC to detect a failed session in a reasonable amount of time. </add> _______________________________________________ Pana mailing list [email protected] https://www1.ietf.org/mailman/listinfo/pana
