Hi All,

Yesterday I received a very manageable referee report for the IQUV wedge
paper. I've already made all the changes requested except for the first
one, which calls for a further discussion of the Asad+'15 results in
relation to ours. There are a few directions I could go in here. Happy to
talk about this on the datacon later today.

Saul Aryeh Kohn

PhD student
University of Pennsylvania
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4N7 Center for Particle Cosmology
David Rittenhouse Laboratory
209 South 33rd Street
Philadelphia PA, 19104

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March 8, 2016

Mr. Saul Aryeh Kohn
University of Pennsylvania
Department of Physics and Astronomy
David Rittenhouse Laboratories
209 South 33rd Street
Philadelphia, Pennsylvania 19104


Title: Constraining Polarized Foregrounds for EOR Experiments I: 2D Power
Spectra from the Paper-32 Imaging Array

Dear Mr. Kohn,

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thinks that your article is interesting and that it will merit publication
once you have addressed the issues raised in the report.

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Referee Report
Reviewer's Comments:
The authors are constraining the polarized foregrounds by analysing
PAPER-32 imaging array data in full Stokes. They conclude that with even
modest polarisation calibration they do not see evidence that polarisation
calibration errors move power outside the wedge in any Stokes visibilities,
to the noise level attained. Before recommending publication of this paper
a few points should be clarified.

A major conclusion of the paper differs from a recent study by Asad et al.
2015 that showed on the LOFAR data that there is the polarization leakage
in the cylindrical power spectrum above the point spread function
(PSF)-induced wedge relevant for the EoR experiments. Please clarify this
in the text (Sec 1 and 4) and discuss differences between the two studies.
Section 1: Please note that foreground avoidance has its limitations.
Combining it with foreground removal one can recover significantly more EoR
signal at small k for both current and future experiments. Please clarify
this in Introduction and cite e.g. Chapman et al. 2016 MNRAS.
Section 2.2.3: "Standard full polarisation calibration involves correcting
for leakage of Stokes I into the V^xy and Vyx visibilities....". Please
clarify in the text that one should also correct for leakage from polarized
to the total intensity.
Section 2.2.3: Based on ionospheric RM please calcule ate how much of
depolarization, incoherent averaging, do you expect.
Section 3: "...since we expect Stokes I to be approximately 3 orders go
magnitude stronger than the other polarisation products ...." This is true
only for specific scales and specific regions in the sky. Please clarify
this in the text.

Report from Statistics Editor:

In eqn 3, I recommend that the designation of the left-hand variable change
and not be called "the \chi^2 statistic". The function of visibilities
specified here is not a standard statistic. One might call the procedure
`minimizing a sum of squared weighted residuals' or something like this.
But it has no formal relation to the statisticians chi-squared test
(invented by Pearson c1900 for entirely different purposes, and subject to
debate by Neyman and others). And there is no guarantee that the
distribution of the function around its minimum value will follow a
chi-squared distribution. Thus, unless mathematical proofs are presented or
bootstrap-type resampling is performed, one cannot associate values of this
function with probabilities using tables of the chi-squared distribution.

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