Heiko wrote:
Hi,

some comments from a nonnative speaker (beware!)

Where your spelling or grammatical corrections were correct, I made the suggested changes in r36782 and 36783. I didn't touch anything where more thought is required.



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In section 'Optional Parameters', 4th paragraph
the list of positional parameters
instead of the list of postional parameters

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In section 'Sub PMCs', 2nd paragraph:
maybe
'you need to first select the namespace PMC'
instead of
'you need to first the the namespace PMC'


Done.

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In section 'Creating and Using Continuations', end of 3rd paragraph
'notation'
instead of
'notaton'

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In section 'Scope and HLLs', 2nd paragraph
'Parrot doesn't have any direct analog'
instead of
'Parrot does't have any direct analog'


Done.


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In section 'LexPad and LexInfo PMCs', 1st paragraph
'we already mentioned briefly'
instead of
'we already mentioned breifly'


and in the 5th paragraph
'there are a limited number of operations that you can call it with'
instead of
'there are a limited number of operations that you can call with it'


Stet.


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in section 'Namespaces', 6th paragraph, last sentence:
'to keep alike things together'
instead of
'to keep like things together'


Stet.


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