I went through the changes in the draft (thanks Pete for posting the diff which helps identifying the changes!), and even though there are a lot of changes, they are mostly rewordings, text rearrangements and removal of redundancies. The only one issue I found was with the last paragraph of section 3.2, which after rewording became odd. I would suggest replacing it with "Optionally, and in place of steps 1-3 above, the master device can be pre-configured with the address (eg, URI) of one or more trusted databases." This change can be done together with any additional resolutions to resolve any iesg comments. I would suggest this draft is taken to the iesg on the Feb21 telechat.
Thanks Pete, Tony and all of you who contributed to it, - Gabor -----Original Message----- From: [email protected] [mailto:[email protected]] On Behalf Of ext Pete Resnick Sent: Thursday, February 14, 2013 8:13 PM To: [email protected] Subject: Re: [paws] I-D Action: draft-ietf-paws-problem-stmt-usecases-rqmts-13.txt Folks, Many thanks to Tony for working through all of the Last Call comments and posting this new draft. I'm in the process of getting everything ready for it being on next week's IESG Telechat (Feb 21) for evaluation. However, there were a *bunch* of changes between this version (-13) and the last (-12). While I will go ahead with this draft, I'd like folks in the WG to review the changes and make sure everything is still in line with WG consensus. If there are concerns, the chairs can always let me know and I can postpone it for the next telechat (unusually in only 1 additional week due to scheduling weirdnesses, Feb 28). But unless I hear differently, I'm going to assume that this is as desired. The diff tool didn't do a good job of figuring out the differences because Tony re-arranged some parts of section 5 to earlier in the document. I've made a re-arranged copy of -12 that will compare better with -13 and put it on my own web site. To see the diff, try this: http://tools.ietf.org/rfcdiff?url1=http://resnick1.qualcomm.com/draft-ietf-paws-problem-stmt-usecases-rqmts-12-pr.txt&url2=draft-ietf-paws-problem-stmt-usecases-rqmts-13.txt I hope that helps. pr On 2/14/13 5:21 PM, [email protected] wrote: > A New Internet-Draft is available from the on-line Internet-Drafts > directories. > This draft is a work item of the Protocol to Access WS database Working > Group of the IETF. > > Title : Protocol to Access White Space (PAWS) Database: Use > Cases and Requirements > Author(s) : Anthony Mancuso > Scott Probasco > Basavaraj Patil > Filename : draft-ietf-paws-problem-stmt-usecases-rqmts-13.txt > Pages : 23 > Date : 2013-02-14 > > Abstract: > Portions of the radio spectrum that are assigned to a particular use > but are unused or unoccupied at specific locations and times are > defined as "white space." The concept of allowing additional > transmissions (which may or may not be licensed) in white space is a > technique to "unlock" existing spectrum for new use. This document > includes the problem statement for the development of a protocol to > access a database of whitespace information followed by use cases and > requirements for that protocol. Finally, requirements associated > with the protocol are presented. > > > > The IETF datatracker status page for this draft is: > https://datatracker.ietf.org/doc/draft-ietf-paws-problem-stmt-usecases > -rqmts > > There's also a htmlized version available at: > http://tools.ietf.org/html/draft-ietf-paws-problem-stmt-usecases-rqmts > -13 > > A diff from the previous version is available at: > http://www.ietf.org/rfcdiff?url2=draft-ietf-paws-problem-stmt-usecases > -rqmts-13 > > > Internet-Drafts are also available by anonymous FTP at: > ftp://ftp.ietf.org/internet-drafts/ > > _______________________________________________ > paws mailing list > [email protected] > https://www.ietf.org/mailman/listinfo/paws > -- Pete Resnick<http://www.qualcomm.com/~presnick/> Qualcomm Technologies, Inc. - +1 (858)651-4478 _______________________________________________ paws mailing list [email protected] https://www.ietf.org/mailman/listinfo/paws _______________________________________________ paws mailing list [email protected] https://www.ietf.org/mailman/listinfo/paws
