Hi Alvaro Many thanks for these comments. I have read them, but need to have a discussion with my co-authors before I can answer them all. I hope to get back to you with a full reply early next week.
Many thanks Jon -----Original Message----- From: Alvaro Retana <aretana.i...@gmail.com> Sent: Wednesday, 5 December, 2018 3:25 PM To: The IESG <i...@ietf.org> Cc: draft-ietf-pce-segment-rout...@ietf.org; Dhruv Dhody <dhruv.i...@gmail.com>; pce-cha...@ietf.org; pce@ietf.org Subject: Alvaro Retana's Discuss on draft-ietf-pce-segment-routing-14: (with DISCUSS and COMMENT) Alvaro Retana has entered the following ballot position for draft-ietf-pce-segment-routing-14: Discuss When responding, please keep the subject line intact and reply to all email addresses included in the To and CC lines. (Feel free to cut this introductory paragraph, however.) Please refer to https://www.ietf.org/iesg/statement/discuss-criteria.html for more information about IESG DISCUSS and COMMENT positions. The document, along with other ballot positions, can be found here: https://datatracker.ietf.org/doc/draft-ietf-pce-segment-routing/ ---------------------------------------------------------------------- DISCUSS: ---------------------------------------------------------------------- I am balloting DISCUSS because I think that there are some technical and clarity issues that makes understanding, and potentially implementing this document hard. I also want to discuss the "backwards compatibility" and the use of TLVs as sub-TLVs in PCEP as introduced in this document. (1) MSD Definition. The MSD may be learned from a variety of sources, including the SR-PCE-CAPABILITY sub-TLV defined in this document. It is important then for the MSD to be defined consistently everywhere. Please use the BMI-MSD definition from rfc8491. (2) Ability to signal the MSD per link, not just per node. Clearly the calculation of paths through specific links (using an Adjacency SID, for example) would require that information (if different/lower from what the node may support). Note that §6.1 seems to assume that the MSD will normally be advertised through different mechanisms, and it uses that to work around the fact that there's no link-specific information: "Furthermore, whenever a PCE learns the MSD for a link via different means, it MUST use that value for that link regardless of the MSD value exchanged in the SR-PCE-CAPABILITY sub-TLV." However, the text doesn't mandate the IGP/BGP-LS information to be available to the PCE. IOW, as written, the specification can't guarantee the proper calculation of paths that require the PCE to consider link MSDs. (3) Extensibility to advertise other MSD-Types. [This point is not DISCUSS-worthy, but I'm including it here since I'm already talking about the MSD.] rfc8491 (aka I-D.ietf-isis-segment-routing-msd) and I-D.ietf-ospf-segment-routing-msd encode the MSD advertisement as a pair: MSD-Type and MSD-Value, with the expectation that "new MSD-Types will be defined to signal additional capabilities, e.g., entropy labels, SIDs that can be imposed through recirculation, or SIDs associated with another data plane such as IPv6." IOW, the encoding is reusable with other dataplanes. I peeked into draft-negi-pce-segment-routing-ipv6 [*] and i don't see anything in there that couldn't be signaled using the SR-PCE-CAPABILITY sub-TLV defined here (+ the MSD_Value). I think this is important for consistency. [*] I realize that draft-negi-pce-segment-routing-ipv6 is not even a WG document, but it is the only potential reference I found to what a different dataplane might look line. (4) §6.2.2 (Interpreting the SR-ERO): o If the subobjects contain NAI only, then the PCC first converts each NAI into a SID index value by looking it up in its local database, and then proceeds as above. I believe that this step in the interpretation of the SR-ERO is not properly specified. Which "local database" are you referring to? §6.2.2.1 mentions the SR-DB (when talking about errors)...but the specification should be clear about which database and what the specific procedure is. For example, what is the specific process that the PCC needs to follow to convert a Node ID/IP address to the SID/MPLS label? What if the SR-DB doesn't contain an SID associated to the specific Node ID/IP address? How should the router react to that? This case is not covered in the Error Handling section (6.2.2.1) either. A pointer to the SR-DB (as defined in I-D.ietf-spring-segment-routing-policy) is not enough because it is composed of optional information (according to the description in §3 (Segment Routing Database)). This document should be specific about what information must be contained in the SR-DB for the conversion to be successful. The requirement of the information to be contained in the SR-DB makes I-D.ietf-spring-segment-routing-policy a Normative reference. (5) §7 (Backward Compatibility) "Some implementations, which are compliant with an earlier version of this specification..." <sigh> I understand that there may be implementations that are non-compliant with this specification out in the field. However, why is this document making accommodations for them? Not only are these implementations not compliant with this document, but are also non compliant with rfc8408, which implies the use of a new sub-TLV per PST. I didn't find a discussion on the mailing list related to this issue. Specifying alternate behavior to accommodate non-compliant implementations is not the best way to define new functionality. If the support for those old implementations was an imperative then the new functionality should have been fully specified to seamlessly interoperate with what is already deployed. The current result is two ways to do the same thing... While I would prefer for this "backwards compatibility" not to be built into the specification, I am looking for discussion in the WG and a better justification that the current one (which can be reduced to "non-compliant implementations exist, so we need to fit them in here somehow"). (6) sub-TLV Space for the PATH-SETUP-TYPE-CAPABILITY TLV rfc8408 failed to set up a sub-TLV registry for the PATH-SETUP-TYPE-CAPABILITY TLV. The bigger issue is that it also doesn't say that other PCE TLVs can be used as sub-TLVs (nor does it prohibit that). The Type for the SR-PCE-CAPABILITY sub-TLV is allocated from the PCEP TLV Type Indicators registry, making it a TLV. I also couldn't find any mention of sub-TLVs in rfc5440, or the potential intent to have a single space from which both TLVs and sub-TLVs could come. The question is: are all TLVs (defined in the PCEP TLV Type Indicators registry) able to be used as sub-TLVs? This question is general, but also specific to the PATH-SETUP-TYPE-CAPABILITY TLV. At a minimum, it should be made clear which can be used with the PATH-SETUP-TYPE-CAPABILITY TLV -- because this is the first document to define a new PST and sub-TLV, it seems appropriate to Update rfc8408 here...but rfc5440 may also need an Update. ---------------------------------------------------------------------- COMMENT: ---------------------------------------------------------------------- These comments don't raise to the level of a DISCUSS, but I would like to also see them addressed. (1) [nit] "Both node segments and adjacency segments can be used for SR Traffic Engineering (SR-TE)." I find the use of SR-TE (instead of simply SR) gratuitous and potentially confusing; it introduces a new term which doesn't represent new functionality as compared to exiting segment routing documents. (2) "This document is relevant to the MPLS forwarding plane only." I believe that I-D.ietf-spring-segment-routing-mpls should be a Normative reference. (3) In §3, the first two paragraphs have redundant text: "In an SR network, the ingress node of an SR path prepends an SR header to all outgoing packets. The SR header consists of a list of SIDs (or MPLS labels in the context of this document)....In SR networks, an ingress node of an SR path prepends an SR header to all outgoing packets. The SR header consists of a list of SIDs (or MPLS labels in the context of this document)." (4) §3: "...the PCEP messages (e.g., Path Computation Request, Path Computation Reply, Path Computation Report, Path Computation Update, Path Computation Initiate, etc.,) MUST be formatted according to [RFC5440], [RFC8231], [RFC8281], and any other applicable PCEP specifications." I'm not sure what behavior is being specified here -- IOW, why do we need Normative language? This document defines the extensions referred to here, so the format should already be compliant with the RFCs mentioned. s/MUST/must (5) Following up from the last point... §4 seems to address that MUST by saying that there's no requirement for "changes in the format of the PCReq and PCRep messages specified in [RFC5440], PCInitiate message specified in [RFC8281], and PCRpt and PCUpd messages specified in [RFC8231]." I find this section unnecessary. (6) [nit] §5.3.1 defines the "L Flag"... §6.1, for example, uses "L flag" to refer to the L bit (§5.1.1). Please try to be consistent to avoid confusion...or even better, use a different letter. (7) §5.1.1 says that a "PCEP speaker SHOULD indicate its support of the function described in this document by sending a PATH-SETUP-TYPE-CAPABILITY TLV...[and]...MUST also include the SR-PCE-CAPABILITY sub-TLV"...but §6.1 then says that "if a PCE receives an SR-PCE-CAPABILITY sub-TLV with the L flag and MSD both set to zero then it MUST assume that the PCC is not capable of imposing a SID stack of any depth and hence is not SR-TE capable". Wait, the sub-TLV is included because the TLV says that it supports SR. Isn't this then a contradiction?? What good is it to signal support if the node is "not capable of imposing a SID stack of any depth"? Shouldn't this combination result in an error message? (8) §6.2.2 "According to [I-D.ietf-spring-segment-routing-policy], each SR-ERO subobject in the sequence identifies a segment that the traffic will be directed to, in the order given." The SR-ERO subobject is defined in this document, so its interpretation is of obvious importance. Because of that, I think that the text above makes the reference Normative. However, I looked in I-D.ietf-spring-segment-routing-policy and I find no mention of the SR-ERO, ERO, or sequence. The only related text (that I could find) is the generic one about SR being an "ordered list of segments"...so I think that the reference to I-D.ietf-spring-segment-routing-policy is out of place. Suggestion: replace the reference to I-D.ietf-spring-segment-routing-policy with a reference to rfc8402. (9) §6.2.2 "If the subobjects contain SID index values, then the PCC converts them into the corresponding MPLS labels by following the procedure defined in [I-D.ietf-spring-segment-routing-mpls]." I think this statement requires I-D.ietf-spring-segment-routing-mpls to be a Normative reference. (10) §6.2.2 Only the third procedure ends with "...and then directs the packet to the segment identified by the first SID", which is the obvious next step, but the text is only talking about the conversion. Either make sure that it is clear that all the processes continue with sending, or take this piece of text out. Be consistent. (11) §5.5 "...the PCE MUST minimize the SID depth of the computed path." If the B bit is not set (meaning not bound), what behavior is this phrase standardizing? Given that we're not standardizing the computation done by the PCE, how can it be enforced? (12) §8.1 (Controlling the Path Setup Type) I find this section out of place in this document. rfc8408 is the document that specifies the support for multiple path setup methods...while this document adds the SR-related type. If kept, then I think this document should be tagged to Update rfc8408. _______________________________________________ Pce mailing list Pce@ietf.org https://www.ietf.org/mailman/listinfo/pce
