On Jul 1, 2019, at 4:58 PM, Cyril Margaria 
<cyril.marga...@gmail.com<mailto:cyril.marga...@gmail.com>> wrote:

Thanks for the review,

please see inline

Best regards,
Cyril Margaria


On Tue, 9 Apr 2019 at 20:41, Suresh Krishnan via Datatracker 
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draft-ietf-pce-gmpls-pcep-extensions-14: No Objection

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* Section 2.5.2

"In this object type the order of the TLVs MUST be followed according to the
object type definition."

Not sure what this means. Can you clarify?


[MC] This refers to Section 2.5.1 Generalized Endpoint Object Type,
the TLV ordering matters (for a given object type).
A better wording could be as follows:
NEW:
All endpoint TLVs have the standard PCEP TLV header as defined in
   [RFC5440] section 7.1.  For the Generalized Endpoint Object Type the
   TLVs MUST follow the ordering defined in Section 2.5.1.

Works for me.


* Section 2.7

"C-Type (8 bits): the C-Type of the included Label Object as defined in
[RFC3471]."

I could not find any references to C-Types in RFC3471. Shouldn't you be
referring to RFC3473 instead? I have a similar comment for the Label field.


[MC] The reference should indeed be RFC3473 for the C-Type.

Excellent. Thanks for the changes.

Regards
Suresh
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