I've also read the new version and -02 content is more streamlined and looks good to me.
+1 for proceeding on WGLC Thanks Andrew On 2023-11-16, 9:14 AM, "Pce on behalf of Adrian Farrel" <pce-boun...@ietf.org <mailto:pce-boun...@ietf.org> on behalf of adr...@olddog.co.uk <mailto:adr...@olddog.co.uk>> wrote: CAUTION: This is an external email. Please be very careful when clicking links or opening attachments. See the URL nok.it/ext for additional information. Hi, I've read the new version of this draft. I think it is ready for publication, but you have used smart quotes for the apostrophes in the Abstract and Introduction. Thanks for all the work. Adrian -----Original Message----- From: Pce <pce-boun...@ietf.org <mailto:pce-boun...@ietf.org>> On Behalf Of julien.meu...@orange.com <mailto:julien.meu...@orange.com> Sent: 09 November 2023 17:13 To: pce@ietf.org <mailto:pce@ietf.org> Subject: [Pce] 2nd WGLC for draft-ietf-pce-pceps-tls13 Dear PCE WG, As suggested by Sean during the WG meeting today, this message starts a 2nd WG last call on draft-ietf-pce-pceps-tls13-02 [1]. Please, express any comments you have about the latest revision of this document (diff in [2]) using the PCE mailing list.. This WGLC will end on Friday 24th November 2023. Thanks, Julien -- [1] https://datatracker.ietf.org/doc/draft-ietf-pce-pceps-tls13/ <https://datatracker.ietf.org/doc/draft-ietf-pce-pceps-tls13/> [2] https://author-tools.ietf.org/iddiff?url1=draft-ietf-pce-pceps-tls13-01&url2 <https://author-tools.ietf.org/iddiff?url1=draft-ietf-pce-pceps-tls13-01&url2> =draft-ietf-pce-pceps-tls13-02&difftype=--html ____________________________________________________________________________ ________________________________ Ce message et ses pieces jointes peuvent contenir des informations confidentielles ou privilegiees et ne doivent donc pas etre diffuses, exploites ou copies sans autorisation. Si vous avez recu ce message par erreur, veuillez le signaler a l'expediteur et le detruire ainsi que les pieces jointes. Les messages electroniques etant susceptibles d'alteration, Orange decline toute responsabilite si ce message a ete altere, deforme ou falsifie. Merci. This message and its attachments may contain confidential or privileged information that may be protected by law; they should not be distributed, used or copied without authorisation. If you have received this email in error, please notify the sender and delete this message and its attachments. As emails may be altered, Orange is not liable for messages that have been modified, changed or falsified. Thank you. _______________________________________________ Pce mailing list Pce@ietf.org <mailto:Pce@ietf.org> https://www.ietf.org/mailman/listinfo/pce <https://www.ietf.org/mailman/listinfo/pce> _______________________________________________ Pce mailing list Pce@ietf.org <mailto:Pce@ietf.org> https://www.ietf.org/mailman/listinfo/pce <https://www.ietf.org/mailman/listinfo/pce> _______________________________________________ Pce mailing list Pce@ietf.org https://www.ietf.org/mailman/listinfo/pce
